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Hey! Hit me up if you want to participate in some honest review swaps. I'm looking for actual feedback and opinions, so beware. I will be brutally honest on yours.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/shadow-fall_25894452006537305

I'd be up to do a review swap. A review and comments on a few chapters, your honest opinions, of course, would be helpful. Here is the link to my novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

xJavierMex Thanks I'll be sure to review your story in about the next 24 to 48 hours.

Slow_Neptune Sounds good to me. Just finished yours.

xJavierMex I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm going to try and release chapters every 2 to 5 days. I'll make sure to leave a few comments and a review of your book.

xJavierMex I just read through some of your initial chapters. I left a few comments and a review. I think your story has great potential as you polish your writing ability. Also if you enjoyed my story and want to come back to it later make sure to add it to your library.

Slow_Neptune Like I said, I appreciate the critique and pointers. I'll definitely add yours to my collections.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-tale-of-immortality-and-power_26222952305451105
only two chapter i need honest review and comment please I will do same as ur.

musa45 I left some comments on your chapters. Since I don't have much plot to go on yet I don't think I have enough material to leave a full review. Your writing style has some potential. Overall your first two chapters were well written just not well told (I left more details in my comments). I hope you continue to grow as a writer and tell the stories you want to tell. I would appreciate it if you also check out my book.