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musa45 I left some comments on your chapters. Since I don't have much plot to go on yet I don't think I have enough material to leave a full review. Your writing style has some potential. Overall your first two chapters were well written just not well told (I left more details in my comments). I hope you continue to grow as a writer and tell the stories you want to tell. I would appreciate it if you also check out my book.

xJavierMex I just read through some of your initial chapters. I left a few comments and a review. I think your story has great potential as you polish your writing ability. Also if you enjoyed my story and want to come back to it later make sure to add it to your library.

xJavierMex I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm going to try and release chapters every 2 to 5 days. I'll make sure to leave a few comments and a review of your book.

xJavierMex Thanks I'll be sure to review your story in about the next 24 to 48 hours.

CLAIRVOYANT Could you leave a link to it? I'm willing to do a review swap and give your novel a try. Here is the link to my novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

I'd be up to do a review swap. A review and comments on a few chapters, your honest opinions, of course, would be helpful. Here is the link to my novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

Here is a new fantasy novel I've started recently:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

I recommend doing review swaps with other people. Basically, you review their book and they review your book. Also, it takes a long time to build an audience so don't be discouraged if you're initially not getting readers. Some other tips I have is to make sure you have an engaging synopsis, an eye-catching cover, and to update regularly. Updating regularly is essential on this site as I've seen readers on this site like long stories and like to know they can reliably get chapters consistently. I'm still new to this site but these are just some things that I've noticed. I hope this helps.

ThePression Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoyed reading my story. Any additional feedback you have? Also, I will make sure to review your story.

Here is a new fantasy novel I've started recently:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

Here is a new fantasy novel I've started recently:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

BS_Entertainment I've reviewed your story. You have such a great talent for describing the mental state of your characters. Your use of symbolism and metaphors added a lot of depth to your story.

Trinit33 I left a review for your story. The strongest aspect of your writing is being able to set up the atmosphere of a scene.

BS_Entertainment Thank you for the review. I have added your book to my library and I will make sure to read it and leave a review on it in the next couple of days.

Here is a new fantasy novel I've started recently:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

BS_Entertainment Sure, leave a link to your novel. It may take me a few days but I make sure to get around to it.

Trinit33 Thank you for your kind review. I'll make sure to check your book out.

DivineFifteen 10 years, wow that's a long time. I've only been developing my novel for the past 5 years and there are still some details I need to work out. I will keep reading at a somewhat steady pace. It seems like your story is building up to some grand moments with all the planning that has gone into it. I also saw the comment you made on my story, so thank you for the feedback. I saw that you mentioned you didn't really connect to Hirow yet. I recommend you read up to chapter 6 to better understand him. Any feedback is also welcomed.

I read the first two chapters of your story and I really like it. The world you have set up is so unique and interesting. I'm going to continue reading a few more chapters before I give it a proper review.

I would appreciate you also giving my novel a chance:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/walking-with-celestials_26075155005941705

Here is the synopsis for my novel:
Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.

Paul_Okito Thanks for the review I'll make sure to check your book out.