I have been an avid reader since 2017 too ooo... I am trying to write this year... I think I will follow in your footsteps ooo

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MagusBahaghari

I've put a review on your book. And my greatest apology if I sounded harsh, because the way I judge a book is how good the 1st chapter are.

And if I was 100% click with it, I'm digging in, and so does the opposite.

You can do mine if you had times. Maybe do the same thing as I was.

      MansonFD7

      I am not keen on posting a review of your book yet.

      I have seen way more grammatical issues in your first chapter that I might sound harsh if I post a review. And I don't want that. You can check my paragraph comments.

      Moreover, the prelude does not excuse you to go on an info-dumping spree.

      I fixed the info-dumping in my book's two chapters for I wanted to experiment with Webnovel.

      Also, I suggest you learn about creative writing. I have been a news writer, and feature writer for a major online publication and have even worked in senior editorial staff. I have been trained in journalism for years and have received recognition for my writing.

      Novel writing is a new territory this year and I have been learning this craft while I have been writing my first book. I am not entitled to share this but this is to omit the notion that I can easily be bullied.

      What you have commented on in my paragraphs can be counted as bullying. Unless you reveal your identity and the awards and recognitions you have received from writing, I don't think you have the right to lecture me.

      But we can let bygones be bygones and become friends or acquaintances here. Obviously, you wanted me to check your book. I have been reading lots of books lately while I am also working in a family business and at the same time, writing daily for three books.

      I wanted your review with low rating to stay on my novel page. But reading your work doesn't give you that right yet. So I will have to delete it.

      Don't worry. This does not mean that I dislike you or hate you. But I have been sensing different vibes from you so I am not sure about your sincerity.

      And also, I am a mystic cultivator, an initiate of a mystical school. I can share what I have learned in esotericism through allegory. I want to incorporate mystical elements in my work and that means having to use magical texts where readers can easily understand and contemplate or can get headaches. Readers with initial prejudice are not welcome.

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