After a lot of review swaps, I know that not all give you honest feedback.
So here I am asking for honest feedback from the esteemed group of authors. Because at the end of the day, I just want to be a good storyteller. Please be critical in this thread and encouraging in the review.
In return, I will also swap reviews for your book after reading the first 4 chapters.

Search for "Moonlit Identity" please.

(P.S - Don't forget to tag me here to give feedback + review)

    Flattened_Rice_007 Yeah. Even I noticed that.

    Btw I don’t mind swapping reviews. If you want we can comment while reading so we know if we are actually reading or not.

    Here is my link. Review mine first so I know how much comments to leave.
    https://m.webnovel.com/book/red-blood-century_22463517005516305

    PS:- Don’t mind if I became harsh while reviewing. Some authors gets upset if I give them real feedback.

        RomanceFanatic028 Dropped the review and meant every word I said in it. In the para comments, have given suggestions at a few places. Please feel free to delete them after seeing.
        You story, pace and narration is fabulous. Only at places, punctuation marks and capitalisation have been overlooked. Like in many places there is a fullstop instead of comma. And after full stop, the word starts with a small letter.
        I would recommend you to use grammarly extension, so that it can automatically detect such minor errors.

        It was lovely reading your story. Waiting for your feedback and review too.

            Flattened_Rice_007 btw I am done with your review.

            Sorry for being harsh but your book is suffering from grammatical errors left and right. If you want I can call it out for you again. I wanted to comment about it but there was mistake in every sentence. Again, take the advice for yourself and use grammarly apps.

            Anyway, I have no complaints about your story. It does have potential.

                RomanceFanatic028 Thank you so much for your time and efforts. I do use Grammarly. Maybe we follow different grammar rules.

                Anyways, please leave the book review. Did not get that. And if you want, I will remove the correction para comments I gave. Just let me know.

                    Flattened_Rice_007
                    Hi, I really love writing stories especially a teenfiction or youth drama. I also want an honest feedback about my stories, even if it's a harsh or not as long as I can improve as a writer it's much better. I appreciate it if you try to read my stories and give reviews/ honest feedback.

                    This is the link for my stories:

                    Link: http://wbnv.in/a/79hg9BV
                    Title: Playful Romance

                    Link: http://wbnv.in/a/3ahg9Bq
                    Title: I'm still in love with my ex

                    Note: You might encounter some typo/grammatical error since I'm in the middle of editing it. But if you won't mind, please read it. I'll be glad to read yours just drop your link and I'll give you an honest review. Thank you in advance.

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