Flattened_Rice_007 btw I am done with your review.

Sorry for being harsh but your book is suffering from grammatical errors left and right. If you want I can call it out for you again. I wanted to comment about it but there was mistake in every sentence. Again, take the advice for yourself and use grammarly apps.

Anyway, I have no complaints about your story. It does have potential.

    RomanceFanatic028 Thank you so much for your time and efforts. I do use Grammarly. Maybe we follow different grammar rules.

    Anyways, please leave the book review. Did not get that. And if you want, I will remove the correction para comments I gave. Just let me know.

      Flattened_Rice_007
      Hi, I really love writing stories especially a teenfiction or youth drama. I also want an honest feedback about my stories, even if it's a harsh or not as long as I can improve as a writer it's much better. I appreciate it if you try to read my stories and give reviews/ honest feedback.

      This is the link for my stories:

      Link: http://wbnv.in/a/79hg9BV
      Title: Playful Romance

      Link: http://wbnv.in/a/3ahg9Bq
      Title: I'm still in love with my ex

      Note: You might encounter some typo/grammatical error since I'm in the middle of editing it. But if you won't mind, please read it. I'll be glad to read yours just drop your link and I'll give you an honest review. Thank you in advance.

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