LordShivaStories Heya, I'm done reviewing both the books. I, now, wait for your review.
Review for Review
NPCs hey thanks sure i will do urs too
ShadexRay hey can u pls checkmin eout pls check mine out https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26411639406269405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4324328047 this is my link
theword_witch hey i just wrote a chapter and its a detailed one as compared to the previous ones check it out
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DARK_DEKU I am afraid I can't bring myself to leave you a review for the book on your book page, unless you will be okay with me leaving a very negative review. I've read the whole book and I'll just leave my comments here:
- Lack of plot
- Immature tone, I am not sure if this intentional
- Inadequate punctuation
- Poor character development, including Max - I couldn't tell anything about him. He sounds like he is four of 10 idk
- Insufficient descriptive elements; more suited for a play than a book
I hope this help you improve your book.
ShadexRay sure just give me some time I will do it
Ama_Chuma Hello guys, I just started a new book today, so please leave a review on it, be brutally truthful in it thought
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26455339505162805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4320831345
mahe_ale_aba Sure, I appreciate it if you give an honest review.
Ruemari_Cordan
heyy so sorry i send u the wrong link can u check this one this is the correct link https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26411639406269405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4324328047
mahe_ale_aba I also wonder, why the author's name is different. But I'll try to read it too.
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Ruemari_Cordan thank u so much for understanding
Review swapping here, review mine and drop your link so I can read it and give you a honest review
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24909777606506005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=432083134