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Hi, I just read the first chapter of your book. I left some suggestions in inline paragraphs for you that you can probably use to apply to the rest of your chapters. I guess I should have said before that I do not read books with swear words in them and I noticed that in your first chapter. I thought I didn't have to since it was rated general. So I can't read any further and neither write a proper review from just that chapter. But you have an interesting plot that is different from what I've seen on Webnovel that I would enjoy because my book also follows life in a crime-rampart city. I hope your book finds its audience.

You don't have to review mines since it wouldn't be fair. Thank you

      Here are my novels, whoever is interested in review swap please add any of my novel and review, after reviewing please reply to my message with your link, then I'll add yours and will review ｡⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠｡

      From ordinary to extraordinary: the reincarnated billionaire
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/from-ordinary-to-extraordinary-the-reincarnated-billionaire_26534860606656205

      Hearts of Fortune: A billionaire's Obsession
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/hearts-of-fortune-a-billionaire's-obsession_22230884906275805

      Quantum Rift: Chronicles of the Multiverse
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/quantum-rift-chronicles-of-the-multiverse_26569547406769205

        Synopsis
        a mysterious disease breaks out in the arctic research base, infecting the scientists and spreading to the local population. Cole, a young man trapped in the base, manages to escape with the help of a polar bear he has befriended. He meets another survivor, a boy with a giant eagle as his companion, and the two join forces in their fight for survival.

        As they venture out into the infected world, Cole and his new companion fall in love while searching for other survivors. They eventually join a group of people working to find a cure for the virus, but their attempts only make things worse.
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/ghosts-of-the-living_26224121606688905

          Don't mind if i do,
          Synopsis:
          In a world devoid of superheroes and supernatural beings in the eyes of a girl, Takara Yumi is a devoted fan of superheroes since childhood. Inspired by her lifelong admiration, she decides to pursue her greatest aspiration: becoming a hero herself.
          Utilizing her exceptional intellect gift, she invents a grappling hook glove and wears a protective hoodie, assuming the persona of "Shadow-Web", a hooded vigilante.
          Guided by one of her favorite hero quotes, "With great power comes great responsibility," Yumi wholeheartedly embraces her purpose in life. With every step she takes, a new chapter in the life of Takara Yumi takes shape.
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/takara-yumi-shadow-web_26491152706518405

            [Mature Content]

            Never imagined her fate would be a family debt redemption girl. Ella Quinza, a twenty-five-year-old girl was betrothed by her father to a man named Boy Raymond. The famous billionaire man and his name are everywhere. But no one knows his true face. Because rumors are heard that Mr. Boy is a businessman from the mafia circles who is notorious and ruthless. There was even a reporter looking for his identity about him. But not long after, the reporter disappeared without a trace. What is the fate of Ella's life after becoming the wife of Mr. Boy?

            "Do you know, in fact, I am not willing to accept your Dad's begging for me to marry his daughter? But as soon as I see you here, I get more and more interested ... to make you my servant, Ella." Mr. Boy said coldly as he patted both hands.

            Devil-hearted evil guy! He is eviler than the gossip circulating.

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-little-wife-of-the-debt-redeemer_25761734906064605

              De_Prodigy your novel seems interesting ,
              bTW
              Here's mine , it's short but story is interesting.
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              An assassin who was assigned to kill the biggest businessman in the world. What will happen when she will fall in love with him . What will happen when he will find out about her true identity .

                  Novel name - Servant of Greed
                  Novel Link - https://www.webnovel.com/book/servant-of-greed_26393645405972605
                  Synopsis In a world eternally draped in shadows, where the clash between day and night defines its very existence, a young boy from the enigmatic dark side finds his world shattered by a cataclysmic event.
                  In the midst of his grief and confusion, he forms an unlikely alliance with a powerful deity who emerges from the shadows. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to uncover the truth and restore the balance of the world.
                  Join this unlikely duo as they forge a path through darkness and light, unearthing the truths that will reshape their world and redefine their own destinies. Prepare to be enthralled by an epic journey where hope gleams amidst the darkest of nights.

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