Nnaise
https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternia-a-modern-fantasy-harem-%5Bharem-literoge%5D_26650328806043605
Hello, I already wrote mine, but it only has a few chapters.
It's wierd genre that feels like a visual novel
Are you about to write your first book? I'll guide you
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-kairos_26649423005795705
Hello! I just started writing and I would appreciate any advice you could give me. I only have a few chapters out currently.
Its a Progression Fantasy novel.
L0ST_IN_TIME Hello, I checked yours first. One thing I can comment is that your way of writing is pretty good, even better than mine. But was the symopsis interestingh for the readers to start reading your book? No. Was the first chapter interesting enough for the readers to read the next one? At first it was but then it ended with nothing to expect with the first chapter. As what Ive noticed from most books, you can check out wvery successful and trending books out there and you'll see that they ended the first chapter with something interesting. So you might wanna work on your first chapter and synopsis. This is only my opinion, up to you if you want to listen to it~
Hello. I've started writing my first book. If you can review my book and told me if there's anything I need to work on, then it'll be really helpful.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26142273206414205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4324135552
Nnaise I'm not sure about making a new account and publishing this book again. And it's already my new account so I think I'll just stick with it.
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Fantasy_Girl_42 yeah that was my mistake as well, that was actually not allowed but Ill try to read yours.
Nnaise Thank you. I'll be looking forward for your review and suggestions.
Nnaise I would love it if you did mine, I'm a newbie and my book only has two chapters for now,https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26661402406082205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322188580
Nnaise you can give me your thought and if you want I can do swap review I just want your honest thought https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26627555006962505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321665668
Nnaise Hi, I'm writing a transmigration story and since it's my first time writing that genre I need an honest opinion about. It would mean a lot if you can check it out.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/and-so-it-begun_26506552205322105
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Nnaise Thanks for the advice. I added a bit to the end of the first chapter and changed my synopsis. Let me know what you think if you get the chance.
Nnaise
Hello... Its nice to meet you here.
I'm rookie author, I just published my first lightnovel here.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/crescent-veil-chronicles-of-intrigue_26674737806125605
I would be happy if you could take a look at my novel and give some of your thought.
Thank you 
8 months later
I admire people who can write a book. In my opinion, it's really a talent. It's a pity I haven't managed to do it yet. I am working on improving my writing skills. In many ways I was helped by a review on paper24.com where I was able to find professional writers. And after ordering a few pieces of writing from them, I realized what I need to work on.