ATOMIC_MOON Done with yours. Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
Chapter and peragraph comment sawp
De_Prodigy Done yours. Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
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I'm down! Here is my novel, it's about 2k words each chapter. Since you only have one chapter, feel free to stop on my first chapter too.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26736630905058805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316826855
Perfect_praize Done. Here's the link to my book https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
Noah_Heridia I'll do yours tomorrow! Please wait till that!
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ATOMIC_MOON If you send me a Google doc or something similar of your first chapter, I can go through it and give a detailed review. It's kinda hard to make suggestions on Webnovel.
If you want to send me the doc, my discord is foxner_
Noah_Heridia Can I do that too?
De_Prodigy I might create a post for this. IDK, I don't have much time to go through a bunch of novels and leave detailed reviews for each. I had to do that in my creative writing class and it took ages to get through all of my classmates' writing. You can paste the link to your novel if you want here and I'll check it out. No promises that I will give you a detailed review though.
Noah_Heridia of coursece will do you gave me permission
.anyway
To your novel i think if youbcan describe how blood is dripping from body it woud be more impact full
Like that alley part where a man body was .
You can descibe how the blood was drpping fron his Injuries
ATOMIC_MOON Sure! I'm up for it! http://wbnv.in/a/3ahkRbs
Noah_Heridia Would you be able to do a detailed review for mine as well? If you have the time of course. I just posted the first chapter and would really benefit from some feedback!
Thanks( ´∀｀)
http://wbnv.in/a/3ahkRbs
Also, I can send a Google doc if that's more helpful.
I'll drop my book here.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/crescent-veil-chronicles-of-intrigue_26674737806125605
If you want me to visit your book, please let me know. I might be late for the commenting but I will add your book first to my library.
Perfect_praize
Okay. Review, collections and comments?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-godfather's-hidden-daughter_25347830505670605
Noah_Heridia Done yours. Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
OnikunStudios Reviewed your book! Here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/find-me-in-another-place-and-time_25876557905228005###
Secretive_Sephtis I'll have to get to it tomorrow, it's late for me. But thanks for the comment and review!