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    Annisax Hey I read your story and has an interesting premise. What I found is that it needs a proofreading because the dialogue quotation are incorrect and the grammar needs help. Also there is an inconsistency with the timeline when the things are happening. Mmm the teacher calling Rielle the goodness is sounds weird is ok like between the students but is a little concerning from him. It would benefit if you describe the characters how they look or hints on how the look. I can give you more suggestions but here is a bit difficult here. Keep up the good work! 😊

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