DaoistthV4aQ I liked your novel but as I said in my review the clunky writing is whats holding you back but your story has a lot of potential. Best of luck in improving

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/ashes-of-humanity-the-solitary-survivor_26839785505401105

    Ashes of Humanity: The Solitary Survivor

    Synopsis

    In the aftermath of a catastrophic cataclysm that merged the realms of technology and devastation, Sun emerges as the solitary survivor in a desolate and technologically altered world. Imbued with a mysterious system that grants him unparalleled abilities, he becomes the last flicker of hope for humanity's remnants.

    As Sun navigates the desolate landscapes, peeling back the layers of the cataclysm's enigma, he grapples with the weight of being the final human on Earth, a relic of a bygone era.

    Amidst the ruins of civilization, embark on a poignant journey alongside Sun as he battles for resilience and survival, unearths the truth, and clings to the tiniest glimmer of hope.

    I'm interested on swap review!

      SalomeTadala I'll get the rest of you guys tomorrow, but I think I'm going to do a few more review swaps because I need to work on my own novel. But I'll get yours tommorow

      DaoistthV4aQ Dialogue, it's my weakness but if you can do it well you can make your story so much smoother. I can't really tell you how to improve since its my weakness but if you can improve it your story will too

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