Mystic_Chronicler Bro was cooking when man's wrote that book. Anyone that sees this, give this book a read. It is hella fucking good and makes me slightly envious. Like man my vocabulary is horrible.

And to you man, good luck on your story dude! Keep it up!

    Elusive_Toutawoo It's OK whenever you have spare time. I made some edits according to your advice and some other kind advice I received through comments. In ch 1 I added the extra scene we discussed, and in another comment was proposed to reduce the length of some sentences and paragraphs to make them easier to read. So I did reduce the length, and for one chapter, I divided it into two smaller chapters to reduce the chapter length. I hope I'm making progress. I'm looking forward to your comments. Thank you. 😁😁😁

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