Everyone, I need your help to review this amazing novel of my friend, Empire of Jadase: New Day. Please leave your comments about it or leave a review. Thanks for your help...

    Laquadia First thing first. All review of the novel is a fake. I avoid reading novel with cloners.

    The title did interest me a bit. I like kingdom buildings thing. Update rate seems good.

    While the synopsis made me afraid. I am not anti of LGBT, but there is 2 male leads. That is a bit confusing. Will there be BL down the line? I couldn't read BL story no matter how many times I tried.

    The style of synopsis seems of a romantic genre. It is usually talk about the prince and the princess.

    BL had big market. If it does, advertise it. If it doesn't, I think the supporting cast could be not mentioned in the synopsis.

    However, the fake review drive me away. It showed the author didn't believe in his/her novel. As a reader I also don't believe.

        MasterRabbink first and foremost, when I read the novel, I also thought what you think but as it progresses the true content of the story came alive. I think the author only made a wrong synopsis when he wrote it. PS....I think it ia not about LGBT...THE author just made a wrong synopsis...I guess...or you just understood it in a wrong way. THANKS.

            bachingchung His novel is passable for those who are not his friend. But it is worst if you know him as a writer. Because, as far as I am concerned this is his first time writing novels. That's my answer and that's why I, as a friend, I ask some of you if what you think about his work.

                Laquadia Remove the fake review first! It would look better. Real readers rarely comment, it took huge popular novels to get that many reviews. However that little reviews would show the real supports. All would be useful for new readers to check.

                I have seen too many fake advertisements (who click those banner that said "Hot Girl Looking for A Date?" "That is this lonely Rabbink". All turned out into some behind the screen hacker guy.)

                I always thought novel with fake comments/advertisement like a fake medicine from shady merchant.

                I will try to check the novel later. If I could pass that fake advertisement.

                    Laquadia Those are clones. This Rabbink is a clone detector. As a person in the Dao of Cloner, that is too easy to find.

                    I checked title, cover, synopsis, then move into review (the real one), last update/number of chapters (new novel would have too many chapters, but new novel without update for 1 week is a possible dropped wanna be.), before checking the author's past record (to check the numbers of novel dropped, too many dropped = be careful) before committing to a novel.

                    After Bai, I added author's past records for my reading experience. (You should not write the author stopped update for 2 weeks, that is a bad reader experience for potential readers.) Some best writer already wrote some novels in other platform for example that Bai is a former writer in RRL. Usually his/her fans would mention this in the comment section.

                    This novel passed my title check, but so-so for the synopsis, and totally destroyed by the fake reviews check. I prefer to read multiple author self-comment telling about the novel than author's fake reviews.

                        Laquadia The novel had similar problem as mine. It was too long in the beginning a proof of newbie author like me. Most webnovel would try to hook reader in the 1st chapter at most 5 chapters. It was corrected in the end tho.

                        Info dump is the author biggest mistake. This Rabbink also had come into such term. It is easy to dump a huge load of info. Chapter 1 could be used in the prologue/world background for example. It's a chapter total of info dump. (I believe my earlier chapters are also had similar problem. Your friend should think this novel as a practice novel before he launched another novel.)

                        It has details in background which I like (too much info actually for a webnovel, this Rabbink like that detail but too much so I remember nothing), and a sense of kingdom living and war so fans of that side of RTW might find some interest in the novel.

                        The worst part was like what you said. Unreliable update. That is a huge sin in webnovel. If you don't update for too long, you lost readers. The author should make a 1/week update for example (too little in my opinion) and stick with it. Or 3 chapters/week and stick with it.

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