So I just started yesterday, just comment your opinion on my WN
here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/atonement's-path_27176061705651405
Name: Atonement's Path
It has some complicated words but you can still understand it because of the sentences, the pacing is also bad.
Also here's the whole synopsis
"In a fantasy-driven world, Zagorzaly Frostpyre is a ruthless villain who has killed thousands of humans and other races for pleasure. He has no remorse for his actions and continues to commit heinous crimes with zero regard for human life. His actions finally catch up to him when he is forced to confront his past deeds by the ultimate power in the universe, Luca, who sentences him to live a life of perpetual pain and suffering unless he reforms his ways. Zagorzaly must now embark on a journey of redemption, where he meets new people and experiences things he never thought possible before."

(Note: The Gods here and other religious elements are made by me and it's not related to the religion in our World.)
(Also read this while listening to Rises the Moon cause why not)

    Hey. Just dropped the second chapter to my Web Novel series, My Mafia System: I'm Going To Build The Mafia In A Fantasy World. I'd appreciate it if you checked it out! And if you love it, please pick a collection, leave a review and wait for more chapters.

    Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment. That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic. However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family. Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafiagroup https://www.webnovel.com/book/27025968305098505/72925341009636296?utm_campaign=4322795312

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      I started reading this, Blank. Your writing is really good and there are some action scenes that are superb. The one with the twin dragons in particular. I love how you mixed their thoughts and memories with the action. Really well done.

          Hello everyone!
          I am writing a Novel named "ALL I WANT IS DEATH'

          Genre: Fantasy Romance

          Tags: Timetravel, Revenge, R18 (no one below 17), weaktostrong, mafia, betrayal, contract marriage, love-hate relationship, Deaths.

          It is about a 23 year old girl who lives through four lives and dies all four lives by a loved one or enemy.

          Her name is Aisha. She died at the hands of her father in the first life and by the hands of her husband in fourth.

          All she was doing up until now was try and survive but now in her fifth life she decides to claim her revenge on everyone who had made her life miserable in her past four lives.

          But her life takes a huge turn when she decides to marry her ex-husband's elder brother to escape death by her ex-husband.

          There is a purpose she was brought back in time over and over again. But what?

          Will she be able to kill all who killed her and made her miserable and then get a peaceful death or will die again?

          Excerpt:
          "I am after all a mafia's daughter and am about to marry the most feared mafia the world has ever seen, I must be ruthless. " Aisha said pointing her gun at her rapist.

          " I didn't do it. " He screamed.

          " Not in this life surely, but you did do it to me in my second. You deserve death. You a**hole. " And she shot the bullet at him.

          Bang!!

          CHAPTER 1: DEATH AGAIN

          A lady who could barely stand on her two shivering caught the collar of the one who had stabbed her. She couldn't feel the knife inside her body. However, it did feel hot and her body had been drenched in sweat. She pressed the area where the knife was then slowly raised her head to look up at the man who had done it. Her face started turning red as the pain started to kick in and her eyes were sharp with tears locked in them.
          The one who had done it was none other than her own husband. As the pain started to spread in all the parts of her body also making her legs shiver, unable to take her weight and her blood flew out, making it difficult for her to stop it using her hand, she pulled the murderer closer to her, enough to reach his ear and enduring the pain she whet on top town so that none of her words miss to strike his ears.

          "Was it fun?" She asked then pushed him away from her in rage and anger but he didn't let go of the knife that was stuck inside her. Thus putting the wound in further pain as the knife got pulled out a little. Her spine bent in response to the severe pain and her head started to spin. She could hardly see anything properly, because every object was blurry to her.

          ...... CHECK OUT THE WHOLE CHAPTER AND OTHERS BY FOLLOWING THE LINK BELOW.

          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/27120079005467205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305466728

          I promise I will read your book and give a review of do so for me.
          If you want to contact me and have a conversation about the books you can message me on my Instagram handle: evara__06

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