I started reading this, Blank. Your writing is really good and there are some action scenes that are superb. The one with the twin dragons in particular. I love how you mixed their thoughts and memories with the action. Really well done.
B4lth
- Feb 10, 2024
- Joined Aug 6, 2023
Hi,
I'm here to tell you that my book is the best book on webnovel, bar none. It'll change your life, change your whole outlook on life. My book will make you succesful in love, business and life in general. It'll do all your dishes and wash your car. My book is so good that once you've read it and added it to your library, your enemies will spontaneously combust and small cats will follow you around and rub their heads against your ankles.
Okay, so not a word of that is true, technically. It might not be the best book on webnovel and it definitely won't do any of those things. But I quite like it. If you think a story about an immortal knight living in the modern age sounds okay then give it a read. There's also a small black cat in it, so that's a bonus.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305
This is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305
Interested in what anyone thinks of it.
RyujiSakamata Done! Would appreciate any thoughts you have about mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305 and an honest review.
Your story is good, your first chapter is really well written, the later ones not as good. If you want I could go through and comment on the places where tense switches happened, or grammar things, you could then fix them and delete the comments. Up to you though
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Sure. Swap. Have to work though, so tonight.
Hi Maeve, I've left you a review. Your story is really good! Your characters are well developed, the world is slowly built up, it's really good. Well done
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Maeve_Lindley
I'm in. Really liked your reveal at the end of chapter 1, It was done well. WIll read and review. Would appreciate if you could look at mine too https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305It's an urban fantasy set in Scotland (Edinburgh) about a Knight
P.S. You might want to go through what you've written and look at the tenses. You switch from past to present tense and back again a fair bit. I prefer past tense: I looked, she kicked, rather than present tense: I look, she kicks etc
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Thanks, Rose. I will consider what you said about the chapter length and make them a bit shorter
The_dark_rose14
Hi Rose, I just finished reading and reviewing your story. It's really good, so far it's the only thing I have in my library (very new here). Could take a look at mine as well? Honest review appreciated, it's very short, only 7 chapters so far and I think it's pretty good It's an Urban Fantasy Adventure about a thousand year old man who meets the witch of his dreams!https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305