Seeking Honest Reviews and Collection Swap
TonyaRMoore I will read your story and will leave review, and thoughts on it
Here is mine - https://www.webnovel.com/book/yakuza-the-beginning-of-deaths_27022691006346005
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@DARK_DEKU Hi Patience. I've reviewed your webnovel. Sorry if my review sounds too preachy. I wanted to be as helpful as possible since you are seriously aspiring to become a writer. Please don't be discouraged. That is definitely not my intention. Writing is a craft that requires constant practice, learning, and experience and not matter how many years you've been doing it--there's no such thing as perfect writing. Having said that, please do let me know if you have any questions about my review. I truly hope you find it helpful.
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@Sinadin_2ndth I reviewed System Mania earlier today
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@B_l_a_n_k_2167 - getting started on reading your webnovel now. I usually love Yakuza manga but this is the first time I'll be reading that genre in prose form. No doubt, I'll still enjoy reading it immensely.
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TonyaRMoore Do you want to do a collection swap w me? This is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/pomegranates-for-dinner_27202477605746105
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DARK_DEKU Do you want to do a collection swap w me? This is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/pomegranates-for-dinner_27202477605746105
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B_l_a_n_k_2167 Do you want to do a collection swap w me? This is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/pomegranates-for-dinner_27202477605746105
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Sinadin_2ndth Do you want to do a collection swap w me? This is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/pomegranates-for-dinner_27202477605746105
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@Sinbau cool! I've added it to my queue and it's next in line after the Yakuza novel
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TonyaRMoore Thanks but just wanted to say that collection swap is when both parties save the other's novel to their library. But thank you and I've saved yours in advance
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@Sinbau no prob. I have saved yours as well
TonyaRMoore Done with yours
TonyaRMoore Name: Killer of the academy
Synopsis: This is going to be filled with killing, gore and tortures so if you have a hard time adjusting to these pls read it with a bucket if you want to vomit
Dungeons, magic, everything supernatural awakened. The whole world was filled with terror as they had a hard time to get accustomed to this. But slowly they evolved and knew how to defend themselves.
The people who hunted the supernatural in the dungeon got rich while the weaker ones were eaten up not only by monster but by their superiors too. Now our MC Agastya who has recently joined the Octagon academy which is the most prestigious academy for dungeon hunters.
But as soon as he enters mysterious murder starts to appear in the campus, no one knew why this was happening and the killer didn't even leave evidence. But it was clear the killer didn't use any powers to kill the victims.
Then came the dark secrets of the victims. They all were involved in some dark things like cheating, blackmailing, raping, etc. So, some thought the killer as a hero.
This serial killer used normal human weapons, which were unbelievable in this time. Now watch how Agastya survives along with his friends as they get deep inside this mystery of the masked killer known by his trademark name Yama
Also, yes there will be a harem.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-killer-of-the-academy_27058052005214105
Other novels of mine
Name: Lord of Business
https://www.webnovel.com/book/lord-of-business_27221898905813805
Name: Godfather of entertainment
https://www.webnovel.com/book/godfather-of-entertainment_27243728805890905
B_l_a_n_k_2167 thanks a million!
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@LordShivaStories - same - sorry if I rambled on too much. I just really love psychological horror and I really like the concept you are starting out with. If you don't mind, I'd love to keep it im my library to review again (if the system will let me..?) when there are more chapters published.
TonyaRMoore sure and thanks for the advice. Also yes I need more collection so pls proceed to add it into the library of yours
Please review mine too I will review too uhh and I updating my already released chapter in better quality and chapter 5,6,7 are still in editing but still please review it will help. http://wbnv.in/a/9chsrYb
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@TonyaRMoore Hereβs mine! I would really love to hear your thoughts on my novel! Already reviewed yours! https://m.webnovel.com/book/27021724205082905/72783226967489700?from=detail