Hello! I'm newish around here, so please forgive me (and DO correct me) if I'm not doing this right!

I would love to do some review and collection swaps. I'm seeking honest reviews (chapter comments, questions, and constructive critiques are also most welcome!)

My story is a space opera, scifi adventure series with female leads.

Located here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lore-of-hegira_27244019206140005

::edit:: here's the synopsis:

Bex Atria is many things. She's ill-tempered. She's human. She's a mercenary. She’s one of two billion sapient beings living aboard the leviathan spaceship, Hegira--a wandering world of horror and boundless beauty. Bex has lived in the slums of Hegira all her life. She's done it all. She's seen it all. Nothing can surprise her. Sumida is everything Bex isn't. Sumida is inhuman. She's softspoken, naive, and skittish. She's about to turn Bex's world upside down.

Please link me to yours if you'd like to check it out or do the swap!

    @DARK_DEKU Hi Patience. I've reviewed your webnovel. Sorry if my review sounds too preachy. I wanted to be as helpful as possible since you are seriously aspiring to become a writer. Please don't be discouraged. That is definitely not my intention. Writing is a craft that requires constant practice, learning, and experience and not matter how many years you've been doing it--there's no such thing as perfect writing. Having said that, please do let me know if you have any questions about my review. I truly hope you find it helpful.

      @B_l_a_n_k_2167 - getting started on reading your webnovel now. I usually love Yakuza manga but this is the first time I'll be reading that genre in prose form. No doubt, I'll still enjoy reading it immensely.

        TonyaRMoore Thanks but just wanted to say that collection swap is when both parties save the other's novel to their library. But thank you and I've saved yours in advance

            TonyaRMoore Name: Killer of the academy

            Synopsis: This is going to be filled with killing, gore and tortures so if you have a hard time adjusting to these pls read it with a bucket if you want to vomit
            Dungeons, magic, everything supernatural awakened. The whole world was filled with terror as they had a hard time to get accustomed to this. But slowly they evolved and knew how to defend themselves.

            The people who hunted the supernatural in the dungeon got rich while the weaker ones were eaten up not only by monster but by their superiors too. Now our MC Agastya who has recently joined the Octagon academy which is the most prestigious academy for dungeon hunters.

            But as soon as he enters mysterious murder starts to appear in the campus, no one knew why this was happening and the killer didn't even leave evidence. But it was clear the killer didn't use any powers to kill the victims.

            Then came the dark secrets of the victims. They all were involved in some dark things like cheating, blackmailing, raping, etc. So, some thought the killer as a hero.

            This serial killer used normal human weapons, which were unbelievable in this time. Now watch how Agastya survives along with his friends as they get deep inside this mystery of the masked killer known by his trademark name Yama

            Also, yes there will be a harem.

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-killer-of-the-academy_27058052005214105

            Other novels of mine
            Name: Lord of Business
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/lord-of-business_27221898905813805
            Name: Godfather of entertainment
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/godfather-of-entertainment_27243728805890905

                @LordShivaStories - same - sorry if I rambled on too much. I just really love psychological horror and I really like the concept you are starting out with. If you don't mind, I'd love to keep it im my library to review again (if the system will let me..?) when there are more chapters published.

                  Please review mine too I will review too uhh and I updating my already released chapter in better quality and chapter 5,6,7 are still in editing but still please review it will help. http://wbnv.in/a/9chsrYb

                    nekrom1 I have already added now add mine now please and then I will read yours later

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