Hi guys!!! Lots of love to your!!! I have come here with another request!!!
This book is in development as a part of 'AyodaleVerse'...heroes will meet together in future to bring an end to the evil!!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505
Like always, reading, commenting and reviewing and collection, PLEASE PLEASE!!! Take time!!! but let me know what do you feel about the story!
ToufiqUlAlam
♡ Thanks
hey, i used to be an author. i'd love to check your story and give some feedback. doing this cause I have nothing to do, and this is for free.
Here's an example of review I did using my other account: https://docs.google.com/document/d/106myMs0euBtiloC4mLTjOedTc4XvM7sxIP7V0daFpKU/edit?usp=sharing
GMSJakers
Done
intothedarkabyss thank you very much!!! I would love to know what's going wrong or right...I definitely appreciate...
As we don't have ability to hire editors, we authors help each other find mistakes and help each other...
You are a pro at this. Your help will sure be credited as I do for everyone else.
Thank you very much.
I have two books. One book just ended...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aboron-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
and the other one is in progress...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505
you can take your time...and you don't have to be so formal. Just point out mistakes or suggestions in general as I cannot afford a pay. thank you very much!!
GMSJakers review swap?? yes...thank you very much.
ToufiqUlAlam
It's absolutely okay. I enjoy making things formal (one of my bad traits!) Maybe have the first 5 chapters formal, then the rest will be not super formal. LOL.
Should I comment in-line? I also made a Google document. Just a disclaimer, I'm not fluent in English, so my review may contain inaccurate feedback.
intothedarkabyss Ah forgot to add, I'll do the rest soon.
intothedarkabyss
Hi, can I ask a question?
I'm sorry, maybe it was meant just for [ToufiqUlAlam], but I read your review and damn, it was perfect!
Would it be a problem if I... requested a similar review?
I know you might have a lot of work, but I'm just asking.
Anyway, answer me please when you have time.
Thanks~
Hey! Thank you so much for the kind words. It won't be a problem since I use this opportunity to improve my English. Although, I wouldn't be able to work on it frequently — since the real world can be a little annoying. Just drop the link and let me know if there's anything I need to add.
I'll work on it for sure.
intothedarkabyss
Thank you!!!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/eye-of-aragos-the-darkness-comes_24893738206430405
We can talk later when you have some free time.
intothedarkabyss you can choose to do a review according to your usual habit. no need to deviate from there!! Thank a bunch!!!
Hi there guys...if you think I still haven't reviewed your work, please let me know...There are so much work to do...so I forget sometimes. Let me know!!!
Rarajasmin_jazz ohho!! even with your 2nd language, you can produce such amazing piece of work!!! You capable enough already!!
xish101 I have the same question...maybe keep getting reviews?
xish101 well, just posting 1k won't do. I tried. Maybe something more. Maybe engagement?
intothedarkabyss Respect and Love!! you contributed so much!!! Just thanks will never be enough!!!
ToufiqUlAlam l1ck my d1ck wh*re
ToufiqUlAlam You're doing amazing! Keep up!
Added this to my library. Can't wait to start this.
