Rarajasmin_jazz Oh, will do! Hopefully. Adding your book to my list.
intothedarkabyss
- Joined Sep 25, 2023
Added this to my library. Can't wait to start this.
ToufiqUlAlam You're doing amazing! Keep up!
Hey! Thank you so much for the kind words. It won't be a problem since I use this opportunity to improve my English. Although, I wouldn't be able to work on it frequently — since the real world can be a little annoying. Just drop the link and let me know if there's anything I need to add.
I'll work on it for sure.
intothedarkabyss Ah forgot to add, I'll do the rest soon.
ToufiqUlAlam
It's absolutely okay. I enjoy making things formal (one of my bad traits!) Maybe have the first 5 chapters formal, then the rest will be not super formal. LOL.Should I comment in-line? I also made a Google document. Just a disclaimer, I'm not fluent in English, so my review may contain inaccurate feedback.
hey, i used to be an author. i'd love to check your story and give some feedback. doing this cause I have nothing to do, and this is for free.
Here's an example of review I did using my other account: https://docs.google.com/document/d/106myMs0euBtiloC4mLTjOedTc4XvM7sxIP7V0daFpKU/edit?usp=sharing