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Mootsie_4082 I've seen your work and it wasn't so bad, in a way that it was comprehensible to read. It wasn't that great either, and not because you're lacking creativity, but for the reason that it's not in accordance with the trendy stories at the moment. A piece of advice from someone who's also new, just enjoy the process of writing and let nature takes its course. One day it's gonna be our turn to shine. Cheer up! Just the moment you were able to make 20 chapters without stopping is a great achievement already, you're doing something great!

Mootsie_4082
The novel is interesting and I like it but its a novel that does not work with the audience that visits this website. First and foremost, if you want to write anything that is not related to a "SYSTEM" then it necessary to write all the characters in Chinese. This is a website developed by a China company. SO to improve your views in the story I would recommend you to add a "SYSTEM". It doesn't have to be too big a change. For example: The main character get a system like interface, where the character can see the person's allegiance when the character looks at them. They can get this from a mysterious entity or even a witch in your story.

This is my personal opinion and you can take it as a grain of salt.

If you are interested, could you give an honest feedback about my novel.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/soulbound-retribution-a-tale-of-yin-and-yang_27386302706597705

<Concubine number 20>
Interesting concept! This was the first Female MC novel I read to "The End" (21chap) but I must say, it's good. Writing is smooth (at least for me), sometimes I laughed (), and in about thirty/forty minutes, I was on the End! Veterans may say you need to work harder or something and I may have just small terms for a Good Novel, but I think it's good! Continue with your hard work, Author! It's worth it! [Clapping Emoji]

If you want, you can check out my novel. It's not as Good as Yours but try it
https://www.webnovel.com/book/eye-of-aragos-the-darkness-comes_24893738206430405

just gave you a review a day ago. But we can swap collection and stone if you like

AuthorTeemah

Done! Collected and gave you a power stone.

AuthorTeemah

Patrik_Crown So this is what you were referring to by a bigger review! Hehe. It means the world to me that you read my work, finished it until the most recent chapter (I had just completed uploading chapter 22 ), and that you found the humor in some parts.
Most of the time I feel like I'm just talking to myself because I don't even know who's reading it, hahaha.
I will definitely check out your novel. The title is very interesting to begin with!

Rarajasmin_jazz Yeah, I'm interested to swap honest reviews. It would be nice to know the opinion of another first-time author too.

AuthorTeemah Yeah, we can exchange reviews.

Mootsie_4082 Hello, are you still up for any review swaps?

I just started writing again after a year. And I'm needing someone for honest reviews

Oh and I noticed you've mentioned about feeling depressed cuz of not getting many views or collections. What I want to tell you is don't stress too much about it. I remember how I was also just like that with my first contracted work here a year ago. oh but you won't find it on my profile becuz I'm using a new account now tho

It isn't actually worth to stress yourself for this. Be kind to yourself and just think of this as a fun experience

Here's my work. The title "In love with a human clone"

https://m.webnovel.com/book/in-love-with-a-human-clone_27388230805365805

there are only five chapters so far and my work only passed 5k words tonight. hopefully it'll get vetted next week and the voting option will be available then

If you're up for it, I'll start reading yours too.