Boobaslurper

  • Jun 4, 2021
  • Joined Sep 28, 2020
  • shadowdrake27
    sorry for the late reply. I wanted to reply after i push the "like button", but you know, work and family and stuff. So again, im sorry.

    Yes i can notice. It feels like the writer give me a wake-up slap in the middle of my immersion of the story in a world they build, then give me a mocking smirk. That is why i sometimes feel irritated by the jumping pov.
    Some people said that to make the reader immerse in stories is to use the 1st pov not the 3rd.
    I disagree.
    Because im sure, 100% sure, there are many people out there that similar to me. People that can immerse themselves in stories with whatever pov as long as it is not messy.

    If its about grammar, well... Im sure that you can figure it out from my rant above that im not a native english speakers. That's why i never comment about grammar.
    What i do is look it up, either reading in certain website or grammar book then read the story again with proper grammar.

    Since so many writers in this site gave me rude comment when i point out their mistake in pov, what i do now is just delete the book from my library list and never care about them.

    Let them rot in hell

    • LVTeacherman sadly so many writer/author/novelist in WN neglect, ignore even, number 9, THE POV.
      I'm a person who can't immerse in a story if the pov is messed up, jumping around from 3rd to 1st back to 3rd and then to 2nd and list keep going.
      So i point it out and remind them, but the reply i got? most gave me rude comment, its like they feel insulted.
      Its even more apparent when the said writer already have book/s and many people like it, even though it has messy pov.
      There's even a person replied to me "oh yeah? How many books you write? If you manage to get to top 10 then come back again and talk to me", or "write a story first then you can comment on what pov i should use".

      WTF?!

      Its like, according to their logic, i need to become a chef before i can say the food taste bad. Or i need to become a tailor before i can say the clothes do not fit me. Or i need to become a mathematician before i can say 1+1=7 is wrong. wtf

      sigh

      sorry for my rant, i need to get it out my system.

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