Goroo

  • May 27, 2020
  • Joined Mar 27, 2019
  • In Authors vs Readers (yes, it's a clickbait title)

    hippity hoppity this is now my property.

    • In Invitation to text strategy game!
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    • In Webnovel Writer's Chatgroup
    • In Webnovel Writer's Chatgroup
    • In Tips on How To Be A Better Writer?

      Another thing I would suggest would be to try and form a writers' group with a couple of writers around the same level, so you can comment on each others' works.

    • In Tips on How To Be A Better Writer?

      yaoyueyi Good tips, but I would also include that a large vocabulary not only helps you express things better, it allows you to express then "correctly". For example, saying a "wooden bed" would not be as good as saying "log bed", because the second one means that it's likely to be in the wild, or in a shack or something.
      Also, I would say that flowery description should only be used when necessary. With the example you gave, if the story was not focusing on "her" transformation through cutting her hair, it would be unnecessary and perhaps considered purple prose if you added so much description. That's not to say it should be bland and unfeeling though, and that same "tell" passage could be spiced up with a few strong verbs.
      Apart from that, the rest of the tips are very good.

        • In TGIF#69

          Anotest But Netflix is a whole different ball-game. They have a subscription only (afaik) system, whereas Webnovel has discontinued the premium membership. It's like if you were playing a subscription-based MMORPG, but suddenly the devs cancel the subscription model and ask you to pay to access each individual mission in the endgame. What mharjric wants is something similar to the SW:TOR model, where one month of subscription unlocks all DLCs that were available when you subscribed (here, the chapters you have read). And, as we've seen with EA, it is a completely viable business model.

            • In Editing
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            • In Editing

              Sosin what you've got is pretty good already. join my discord and we can discuss. Although to be fair, reading through it, I think I can help you more with the actual content/style than the grammar. anyway, we can discuss.

              • In Editing

                Hmm idk how this works
                Anyway, I'm offering an editing service (more like proofreading) for free. Obvs.
                I'm already editing Harem of Thrones (bad choice, huh?) but HaremGodZ is lazy and only ups 1 chapter a day.
                If you want an editor/proofreader just hit me up.
                I just can't stand grammatical errors.
                I reserve the right to reject certain novels.
                If anyone wants to contact me just join my discord. (P.S. there's no-one on there right now)
                https://discord.gg/WaSMajf

                P.S.S. I should also add that I probably won't edit any novels that have less than 10 chapters, because I don't want to edit works that the author isn't committed to.

              • In Monster paradise discontinued

                No? it's got 600 something in raws iirc

                • In You get transported to a generic cultivation world wwyd

                  Open my eyes and wake up from that wonderful dream.

                  • In I’m Really a Superstar is it unbanned?

                    it's funny how the owners of the copyrighted titles and content he used in his novel don't chase after him, but the SARFT does. unless the SARFT banned it because of copyrights. idk

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