Nou thank you,
that's pretty much my problem and the article is really helpful thank you!
Gunner_Eat
- Sep 8, 2020
- Joined Sep 7, 2020
Hello, community
I am currently trying to write a web novel. I really mean trying because right now I am definitely not succeeding.
I talked to and showed my brother (studies basically American English) my first chapters. He basically said that I don't have any problem with orthography or grammatic but have a huge problem conveying enough information, making it sound organic and not like (his words) shopping list.
So my question for the community is:
How do I make my writing more fluent and organic or as he said put my words and words in a nice flowery dress?