Hey everyone o/
I wanted to ask. I'm rewriting my story so that it has enough body to it, I'm doing it for fun at the moment. Not hoping to get paid or anything cuz that seems too stressful otherwise I'd not enjoy it anymore XD
I wanted to ask if having a proof reader is a thing? Like someone to read your stuff and have a second opinion? I prefer to have a second about some things and this story is my baby 
Any ideas what to do?
Sara_Wilcox thanks :D
Currently reshuffling my book called The Mutant Siren, so hopefully it'll read better XD
This was very well written :D
I'm a very open person, so I like to write raw, if that makes sense. I'm rewriting a story I've had in my head for years and one of the thing I noticed there was too much in was the sex scenes. There's 3 of them at the moment and only one feels.... Connected. XD
The aim of my story is that the main character likes the idea of sex and is normally surrounded by men (she's a mythical human siren XD) so she has a lot of flings and stuff. But I think I made the chapters too long or the feeling we're somewhat disjointed XD
So reading this now, I'm glad I'm rewriting the story to make it more inclusive. I've had no real life experience with this yet, so I rely on my vivid imagination
Thank you for writing this little article as well :D