Leporidere

  • Aug 17, 2023
  • Joined Mar 11, 2019
  • Workaholics_inc I can really empathize with you. Back when I wrote my very first novel on this site my novel got flooded with flamers who told me that my protagonist is a "beta" and that he wasn't even good enough to be a side character. One of my readers even threatened me! I still remember the pain of waiting for the first comment on my chapter only for it to be some kind of complaint. I really had put a lot of effort into my novel and I started thinking that I really am not good at writing and if I really should stop writing. However, instead of giving up writing as a whole I just stopped writing my novel and decided to polish my writing skill and one day rewrite it. A lot of time has passed since then and I have become a lot better at writing. I also had lots of time to think about the bad comments who were haunting me like a ghost, and I came to the conclusion that...they all were idiots. After thinking about it for a long time, I started noticing that their comments were not fueled by a desire to help me but by their own insecurities and immature beliefs. None of their complaints were helpful or objective in any way and were only there to put me down or to start arguments. All of them complained yet none of them were able to point out the real flaws my novel had. Everyone complained how "unmanly" my protagonist was because he broke out into tears, but none of them were able to tell me that my pacing was WAY too slow or that my summary and cover were incredibly misleading. What I want to say is that you shouldn't be worried about one reader who is being incredibly rude and vague with his criticism and just tell him to piss off. That reader attacked you as a person and if he shows no respect toward you or your writing why should you respect him or that what he writes? Constructive criticism should never be rude to a writer or his work and should try to be as objective as possible. I hope that I was able to help.

    • Hmmm, sounds like a case of procrastination. The problem is that you made your laziness into a habit and the only way to become a hard-working person is to make your hard work into a habit. Try to create a routine and a list of things you have and want to do for today, the more detailed it is the better. If you feel like you don't want to do the thing that you have listed then just use the two-minute method. Every time you don't feel like doing a task you just say to yourself "I will do this task for two minutes". The important thing is that you don't lose the habit of working, after all, some work done is better than no work done. If you want to find more tips on how to become more active and stop being lazy you should try the youtube channel "better than yesterday". I hope that my comment was helpful.

      • Short answer: It was EPIC.
        Long answer: A few years ago I was in some kind of harem craze. After watching and reading so many harem stories where the MC never choices a girl or only choices one, I had an insatiable hunger for harem stories where the MC marries all the women in his harem. I was obsessed with finding the perfect harem story, where no girl got left behind. Soon I became unable to enjoy any story that didn't have a harem in it. My obsession got out of hand and I wanted to read stories with bigger and bigger harems where no girl got left behind. My search for big harems brought me to Webnovel and that was how I found out about this site. I soon stumbled upon a fanfic called Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos and I gave it a try after finding out that it had a big harem. Needless to say, I was blown away by it. It did not just heal my harem obsession, but it also awakened the desire in me to write my own story.

      • Nebel I would really recommend you to give dxd another chance. Issei may be a pervert but he has a heart of gold. Even if he lusts after women he still respects them and would never treat them badly. In the beginning, he only lusted for their bodies but as the series progresses, he slowly gets to know them and starts to fall in love with them as well. As for him being dense, there is actually a good reason why he acts that way. The reason for his dense is the trauma from his first girlfriend who killed him. He also becomes less and less dense as the series progresses so you don't need to worry about that. I think you should give the series another try.

        As for the other series that I have recommended:

        The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You-I think you will really love this one. It really has everything you were looking for. It has good romance, lots of fluff and everyone in the harem treats each other as a family. It's really heartwarming, you should definitely check it out.

        Kanojo mo Kanojo-This one is also very cute. This one also has a lot of heartwarming moments and fluff but it's more focused on comedy.

        Umi no Misaki-This one is more about slice of life but has good romantic development and fluff.

        Kekkon Yubiwa Monogatari-This one is not 100% that what you are looking for (because the MC still has not fully accepted the other harem member except for his childhood friend), but it is still worth checking out.

        Mushoku Tensei-I know that this one has a rather bittersweet ending but it's still worth it. If you want you cant just stop at the penultimate chapter. I really recommend this one because the story of how he built a family with the women in his harem and how he interacts with the is full of heartwarming moments and fluff.

        Also, another manga I could recommend to you:

        Sekirei-This one is more focused on battle that romance but has still some nice romance in it.

        • Nebel
          I actually have a few more mangas to recommend if you want. You can also try Umi no Misaki and Kekkon Yubiwa Monogatari, those two are also good in my opinion. Also if you want me to recommend you novels I could recommend you highschool dxd and mushouku tensei if you haven already read them. You can download the volumes on jnovels and read them.

          • GegeSadewa
            I don't think he would enjoy those two mangas. He specifically asked for a real harem where the MC accepts all the girls and neither of those two has a harem ending. "Love Hina" isn't even a harem, it's just a romcom and I also think that he wouldn't enjoy the girls constantly beating up the male lead for no reason. As for "The World God Only Knows" I also wouldn't recommend that one because the majority of the heroines always forget about the MC which makes all the romantic development between the MC and them pointless. It also doesn't help that the majority of the heroines are never mentioned again after they are "conquered".

            • I think I have the perfect stories for you, but both of them are mangas. The first one is called "The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You". I know that the title sounds ridiculous but trust me, this one is a gem and is exactly what you are looking for. It has A LOT of fluff, every girl in the harem gets a lot of attention and is never forgotten. I would recommend you to read it on mangahub because of some problems with the scanlation group many sites don't have all the chapters and mangahub has all of them. The second one is called "Kanojo mo Kanojo" and is also very sweet. Both of them are real harems, have a lot of fluff, and are really funny. I really recommend you to check them out!

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