Magsman

  • Jan 11, 2024
  • Joined Apr 18, 2021
  • Does anyone know a chinese story/movie about a ml called Louyang saving a half dragon . And getting rewarded with dragonscale. Later he gets killed by his fiance and her father so that they can get his bloodline and Qi to further their own cultivation. But Louyang doesn't die and gets the reward from the ancient dragon since he saved the little halfdragon girl with his blood. He gets pills and techniques. One for the techniques is called flame dragon fist.

    Plz tell me whats the name

    • VULCANO Pick writing into the app and choose contest. IF that doesnt work log into inkstone and create new work. In there somewhere you can pick the contest you wanna join.

      • Vam_V Yeah by blurb I mean synopsis. Google Seat h blurb in you fond grenar articles om how to write one. i think there was a guide Eon blurb writing somewhere in this forum.

        By text dumping , I mean you got way too much text and there isnt that much space. Also you probably could make the text shorter .

        • Vam_V Your blurb needs more work. This is short which is good but is a bit too general . No eye catching and wont bait readers.

          The story has nice flow but is too much text dumping , making it hard to read.

          • ahmed_tanim Depends om you writing. I read a shinobi story ð, where the main MC is reborn as Pain and creates a village. The story itself wasnt that bad but due to bad writing it hard to get into the story . White the other was about Uzumaki clan and MC reborn trying to chance it Doom but failed and creates a new village with escaped uzumakis. The story was enjoyable but it was tio stark for my taste and the mc was arrogant.

            Just write and see

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