Dontlookdown frankly, I can't stand novels with either transmigration, rencarnation or a tutor figure in an object the MC have found. I'm not a fan of system novels, but I normally enjoy then when the system is not focused in combat (like in The Mech Touch or Gourmet Food Supplier)
PSchulman
- Oct 10, 2018
- Joined Jan 20, 2018
I'm one of those few Dreamworlds reader. I'd love to see you keep on writing this series, but at the end of the day you should feel you are taking the best out of your time.
"These swords should be the array base of this Immortal Sealing Array so how could he save someone from such a massive array?"
This suggestion is also kind of wrong, because it's a run-on sentence. The correct way would be to put a comma before so OR to split this sentence in two:
"These swords should be the array base of this Immortal Sealing Array. How could he save someone from such a massive array?"