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DjxCarma I'm doing SternKunst at the moment. But, thank you very much for the criticism of my story. I think I can improve a lot now after reading yours and Starcraft's reviews!
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SternKunst I'll get to yours soon and give my honest review as well.
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DjxCarma I suppose I'll read the one with 50 chapters. I'll give my review in like a day or two so it'll take some time.
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Yvonne_Jemutai An honest review is an honest review, though I was looking for a bit of criticism
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Hi! I'm here for an honest review swap. I'm trying to improve my writing skills and novel to the best of my ability, but recently I've seemed to have hit a bottleneck. Constructive feedback would be appreciated.
I'll give you an honest review if you have a book with less than 50 chapters. If it's any more than that, then I'll give my honest review by reading the first 50 chapters. But before giving your review, please read at least the first 25 chapters of my novel.
The review can be negative, but only if there are any tips for improvements in the same review.
My book is a smut story, so it could be a hard read for some. If you're up for an honest review then here's my link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-cultivating-seductress-system_23429250705423005?ticket=tt33bd20b7e4e94485a5f0f41c37de6297&userid=4318383232Title: The Cultivating Seductress System
Genre: Smut, System, Cultivation, Fantasy, Dark, Tragedy, R18, Ecchi
Synopsis:
Sarah, a commoner girl from the slums meets a mysterious blue light in the forest.The girl ran from the blue light in fear and hesitation. Trying to find a way out before she made a choice she didn't understand.
She didn't want to make her choice. But soon the blue light forced her to make the choice. Her only choice.
She pressed [Yes]...
[Welcome to the Cultivating Seductress System host!]
The Cultivating Seductress System?
Sarah had used her lustful nature to have control all over the slums and the mortal world. Using men and women, both, to get the things she desired while indulging in the bodies of those she seduced.
But with this new mysterious system, will she be able to take the fruits of those cultivators as well?
Will she be able to seduce those arrogant cultivators into doing her bidding?
If she could...
'Now that would be interesting.'
It's practically a sex novel, so if you're looking for that kind of experience with a female MC, then consider checking out my novel. I think I've done a great job in making the R18 scenes as hot as possible. If you want to know the tags, check the novel page and you'll know. Hope whoever reads it enjoys!
Domistro I gave an honest review of your novel after checking it out. So pls do mine as well!
It's a smut story in case anyone else was curious here.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-cultivating-seductress-system_23429250705423005?ticket=tt33bd20b7e4e94485a5f0f41c37de6297&userid=4318383232