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  • Apr 12, 2021
  • Joined Oct 25, 2019
  • Title: Journey into the Dark Universe
    Genre: Magical Fantasy, Multi-lead, Secret Identity, System, Cultivation, Action, Adventure, Romance
    Chapters: 49
    Word Count: 87.7k (@5th, Nov.)

    Synopsis:
    While looking at the messages shared by his friends on Viny's phone, he realized that something was missing from him. He looked right and left and grunted. "Why did I suddenly feel like something was missing from me."

    Was it luck that disappeared from Viny?
    How far could Viny's luck drag him?
    Could he survive from this cycle by his own protection?
    Do you also feel like Viny, sometimes something is missing from you?

    ---

    When a tribe that exists in our Dark Universe makes their tribal magic formation, they do it step by step;

    The chieftain took the bowl and came to Anuo.

    "My existence is a fire." The tribal leader said out loud.
    "My existence is a fire." Anuo then repeated.
    The whole tribe followed up "Good morning, child of the fire."
    "My existence is from blood." The tribal leader said out loud.
    "My existence is from blood." Anuo then repeated.
    The whole tribe followed up "Let the blood come, Spring to the life. Let the soul come, Arouse the fire."
    “Our ancestor Akon Hear me! Anuo will not deviate from your way!” Anuo shouted.
    The chieftain took the liquid and poured it over Anuo's head, and Anuo bit the bloody heart in her hand and ate it to the end.
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    • I only prefer to read and also write in third person pov. Why?
      Because you will be too much enclosed and cannot describe many things, as well as you may not understand what intention the author. Lastly, you cannot let your imaginations go wild and free with other perspectives, only third person pov provide you freedom. I hate shackles, I hate first person' view. I dont want to be strongly against those types. some of unique examples exists and they are really readible. I am talking about general first person pov or multi pov...

      • Ok. I am just guessing here, so I am not responsible about anything, as I am not an editor or staff member.

        "but they're in different channels that cant be access until you've been verified into the server. verification is currently closed to allow mods the chance ot take a a break"
        This sentences were written in newbies channel by xin#7777

        Therefore, I am 'guessing' here that You cant reach anybody for a while. Not sure how many days, probably until end of the month.

        • when did topic go to male leads and your choices... Damn. this subject should be anwered by women. stand by guys! Behold! I wonder what momen think about harem novels as well. dont spoil their thoughts

          • Thanks for the awards. Thanks all who read and decided :-) thank you

            by the way, I was expecting to having become the first place. anyway. lets see authors of female leads on WPC 143. I am in now!

          • I hate the most thing is MC thinks he is face-slapping people around, but no, he just has underdeveloped mind and non-talkative + asocial. social people doesnt need face-slapping while doing jokes around. and face-slapping cannot be done by cursing and showing how powerfull you re. face-slapping done to equal characther of yours, should be done to equal one, little bit difference but generally similar age, similar portfolio, similar interests, and similar iq. if you do face-slapping against an idiot, you should be little be proud! good job.

            author makes me feel urge the burn book... damn dont be lazy to curse people around... Develop a character as a poor man/woman, but dont give a damn like they re really low people. who cares low people? they dont read, they dont develop themselves, they sh!t what they eat. so if you talk about poor, they can be wise as well.. becoming a poor not the way to become egoist, asocial or jeolus of others.. Especially poors generally are very lazy to become egoist or jeolus of riches. but they re absolutely not asocial. many of new books are written by same logic. these authors have to keep develop themselves.

            • Swindler yeah I felt that when I read heavenly alchemi master reincarnate something... damn he behaves like 14 y.o. damn he is about million y.o. author should be out of mind...

              • well, I am a new author as well. Forgive me if I do give a suggestion which is not logical. My way of doing this is creating a path. there is an A3 paper in your hand. put a mini circle on the center. this is your aim. to reach to aim you have put many circles around it. they will surely support your main story. then develep little bit these mini stories into huge chunks.
                after you realized your the man in the background and who is the pulling strings, you start a very short with non dialog stories at the most outer tiny cricles. then try to write a complete pathway and reach the main object. with these at least you will have 300 hundreds of page as raw story.
                Now you re ready to develop your characters, their ideas, stories, and existance.. why they re in your story. put their emotions, behaviors and choices. well done! you can easily reach to 1500+ chapters with minimum1500 characters perse.

                well kinda bullshit may be, But this is my way of doing. I believe this will be good

                • Book Name : Journey into the Dark Universe

                  Genre: Magical Realism, Fantasy, System

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/journey-into-the-dark-universe_18238056106970605

                  Well i will not put here the synopsis, because you can check through the link above.

                  Imagine that all of us in the Earth is under magical formation which milking our luck from us. Therefore we, erathlings are very unlucky. Then some guys who somehow protect themselves against magical formation, can be picked up by formation's master. This guy is very evil and his dao is about luck. thats why he is milking us. well, he picks luckies to be his agents in a system. System is made by someone who I will not give spoiler here. But everything in my story and journey is connected to something and you will have every answer. our agents will try to be God, immortal or try to break shackles of this universe... then it goes Dark Universe...

                  Join me in this multi dimensional magical fantasy ;)

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