Hi, you could take a look at mine if you're interested.
Mainly about a zombie apocalypse happening in Earth. Then before anything major happens, a group of people gets summoned (along with the zombies) into a fantasy world.
Although there is romance, there's a good balance between fantasy, apocalypse, and romance.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15764020106993405/Apocalypse-Summoning
The_Lonely_Guy haha that's fine. I'll review yours once I'm home
The_Lonely_Guy I was wondering why the format of this comment looked so similar to mine... nice copy and paste LOL. I'll gladly do a review swap with you tomorrow once I have time.
SmilingBlueWolf Done. Read a few chapters before I went to sleep. Pretty good novel
SmilingBlueWolf still interested in review swapping?
Avalondra Left a review for yours too. The main thing you need to work on is grammar + spelling. Edit your work once before you post it and it will be perfect
SmilingBlueWolf I'll try to fit time for that today or tomorrow.
Nightmare_weaver Sounds good, but I'll leave my review tomorrow as I'm about to sleep.
Avalondra Sounds good. I'll read your book and leave a review tomorrow since I'm about to sleep.
Hi, I'm looking for a few more reviews for my novel.
Title - Apocalypse Summoning
Genre - Zombie Apocalypse, Fantasy, Romance, Harem
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15764020106993405/Apocalypse-Summoning
If you would like a constructive review for your novel too, leave me a reply here and I'll get back to it once I have time.
Thank you.
Hi, I'm looking for a few more reviews for my novel.
Title - Apocalypse Summoning
Genre - Zombie Apocalypse, Fantasy, Romance, Harem
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15764020106993405/Apocalypse-Summoning
If you would like a constructive review for your novel too, leave me a reply here and I'll get back to it once I have time.
Thank you.
Hi, I'm looking for a few more reviews for my novel.
Title - Apocalypse Summoning
Genre - Zombie Apocalypse, Fantasy, Romance, Harem
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15764020106993405/Apocalypse-Summoning
If you would like a constructive review for your novel too, leave me a reply here and I'll get back to it once I have time.
Thank you.
Hi, I'm looking for a few more reviews for my novel.
Title - Apocalypse Summoning
Genre - Zombie Apocalypse, Fantasy, Romance, Harem
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15764020106993405/Apocalypse-Summoning
If you would like a constructive review for your novel too, leave me a reply here and I'll get back to it once I have time.
Thank you.
Arkinslize I just quickly put in a few paragraph comments, but I'm in the middle of my chapter so I don't have time to go through your whole chp. I hope you can use those comments as an example though.
Arkinslize Yep. The main takeaway is, try reading your chapters out loud before you post the chapters. You mentioned English isn't your first language, but doing this for every chapter would improve your story overall.
Arkinslize i tried to give a higher mark after reading more chapters, but i couldnt figure out how to do that on my phone. I had to get home to do it on my computer.
Had to re-do my review since I didn't know how to edit it. I know for next time to read more chapters b4 leaving a review.
SmilingBlueWolf Thanks for the review and feedback. If the character you don't like is Ren, they will split in a few more chapters. MC and his group just didn't have any chances to split yet, with all the constant zombie attacks and running away.
Arkinslize Left a review for you in your story. I tried to give criticism on how to improve, but I hope it didn't sound too harsh.
Chapter 1 is the most important chapter, so most of my feedback was directed towards that, since its the most important chapter to keep your readers hooked (aside from your Title, Cover Image, and Synopsis).
Arkinslize Thanks, I'll take a look at your novel after work tonight. My novel is going to be different from the standard apocalypse genres because it's a fusion with fantasy elements in it. The zombie infection is mainly there to cause chaos in the new world, but everything will happen slowly since it started in one city, rather that everywhere at once like in a typical zombie apocalypse.
Hello, you could check out my novel, it's a mix of zombie apocalypse + fantasy, with a decent amount of Romance in it.
First few chapters are in a modern setting, before the MC and some others get summoned into a fantasy world with zombies around them.
Title - Apocalypse Summoning
Genre - Zombie, Horror, Fantasy, Romance, Harem
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15764020106993405/Apocalypse-Summoning
Reviews would be nice, but I would appreciate it if you would just give my novel a chance.
Thanks.