XuXinyang thank you for your feedback on my novel. I am reworking them.
Also, I read the first two chapters of blade and miracle. The beginning of the story is a little slow. However, I do like the pacing of the story so far. It's pull you in and you want to know what is next for these set of characters. Also, I like the name are simple and easy to remember. There was a few parts where didn't make sense and I had to reread it. Overall, I like where the story is heading and I will b adding it to my library. Keep up the good work.