Book is called SuperFail
Hi, im new to webnovel and ive enjoyed a lot of stories from here. So ive decided to start a book i have, i hope you will support or just enjoy the book of its too your likeing! =
NEW AUTHOR check out my story! ^=^
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MasterRabbink wow thank you so much, ill be sure to check out you book =/
DragonKnight531 Fellow author here: Your dialogues and paragraphs needs work especially the spacing. It hurts my eyes :P
Myriad_ noted, will fix it soon. And add another chapter implementing that.
Myriad_ i understand, you mean the paragraphs are to close together. And there's some sentence error as well. Im going to update today and add a new chapter, thank you.
DragonKnight531 Yes and no problem. :wink:
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Myriad_
I meant increasing the line spacing between paragraphs. It doesn't matter how space my paragraphs out in inkstone, they always show as having no spacing when read in Qidian Webnovel. For example:
This is how I spaced in inkstone:
No spacing between paragraph one and two.
No spacing between paragraph one and two.
One line spacing between paragraph one and two.
One line spacing between paragraph one and two.
This is how it shows in Qidian Webnovel:
No spacing between paragraph one and two.
No spacing between paragraph one and two.
One line spacing between paragraph one and two.
One line spacing between paragraph one and two.
The spacing used in inkstone doesn't transfer into Qidian Webnovel.
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LawCol Yeah, that's how it is. I think what Myriad_ meant with the post:
Fellow author here: Your dialogues and paragraphs needs work especially the spacing. It hurts my eyes
was for DragonKnight531 to separate his long paragraphs to like 2 - 3 sentences per paragraph since his was a block of text for one paragraph.
DragonKnight531 Ack! Your spacing still needs work. Here's an example of what, I think, Myriad_ meant with the spacing. If I remember correctly, this was one paragraph before so divide it to several with maybe 2 - 3 sentences each, depending on the thoughts on the sentences.
Achilles- His weakness was also his greatest strength. A whisper, a shadow, glimpses of other worldly. That was the first sign of a great change.
The first hero appeared so suddenly that no one really had anything to say, other than to compare these real life heroes to comic book fictional characters. Then, as soon as she rose, claiming to be a hero for the people, she was defeated.
It didn't take long for others to pop up. All claiming their spots as "Heroes". Things began to change soon after. Schools were built and having powers was now the norm. Growing up to see everyone having unique powers, I assumed that it was natural. After all, my mom was the first hero, and even though she didn't save anyone before, she was defeated. I knew how brave she was to stand up. She started the first wave of heroes and heroines, and no one can take that from her.
Hi, my name is May. Unfortunately for me, I'm not one of those people who came to power, and I don't hold any grudges to my father since usually, it’s the parents genes who don't have powers that decide whether you'll inherit any powers. Thanks, dad. Did I mention I hold no grudges?
I'm not an editor or anything, btw, so this is just an example based on my understanding.
DazzlingGem
Oh alright.
I was hoping that someone had found a way to change the number of lines between spacing. Unfortunately seems that it's just not meant to be.
LawCol Yeah, I was looking for a way too. With mine, there was a poem and I can't separate the stanzas. :(
The editor on WebNovel is pretty awful. It's basically just a plaintext file that removes page breaks for some reason. I would like additional spacing between paragraphs. I also always liked the idea of using words that fade out/in by increasing/decreasing font size. It's good for sound affects and emotion. Seems odd that a webnovel platform wouldn't take advantage of the things you can't do in print.
SnoozySloth Erm... increasing and decreasing is a bit troublesome... I believe the format for printed box is better. Some authors wrote for the hope making printed version.
The biggest trouble for some authors is the missing of italic.
MasterRabbink
Yes. For me it's italic and bold. I use these a lot in my stories.
LawCol oohhh i gwt it now. Ill change it on monday thank you
LawCol oohhh i gwt it now. Ill change it on monday thank you
DazzlingGem no thank you, every comment helps. Ill be sure to take it to heart. This is just a practice book, its not meant to be perfect. When i write the book i want ill try to do better. Appreciate it!