There's an interval, so there's no telling how many views your novel got until the end of that interval.
Myriad_
- Feb 22, 2019
- Joined Feb 6, 2018
You can get free SS by checking dailies and power voting each day though?
DragonKnight531 Yes and no problem. :wink:
Fellow author here: Although it's kinda readable, the dialogues and the flow of the story doesn't any make sense? Err.. I'm sorry about that okay?
Also, I noticed that you need to fix the punctuation marks, dialogues, details and most importantly— background of the story and the character themselves. It's confusing if more than three characters suddenly was introduced like a bomb out of nowhere... (I too had the same problem with the character part...)
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Now, let's start our review on the story itself, shall we? Hmm...
The first and second part (Myth and the normal family part) is kinda normal but that doesn't make any sense? What's the scheme behind it? Err... I don't know if you're trying to make the world background a secret so I'm sorry for my ignorance!
For the most parts and so on, you suddenly introduced a whole bunch of characters, which can either make the reader confused or curious. Who are they? What are they? Why are they here?
That's all I could think of so if I'm being rude to you, I am truly sorry about that! I did not mean it okay?
With regards,
Myriad.If someone's novel theme is like those overrated system novels, there's a 50% ~ 70% chance that the author will simply drop the novel halfway. I guarantee it.
So yeah, if the author is quite pressured about the competition or just too lazy to write, there's a guarantee that the author himself or herself will quit writing their own novel. (Drop)
Trust me. I'm an engineer.
Just read underrated novels and you'll be fine. Really.
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bachingchung I laughed.
Either hire some editors by paying them or make some editor fall in love with your novel???
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there's no way to get SS for free except for dailies and powerstone voting I guess? Hmm..
MasterRabbink Ask the chinese spam bots about that lol :P
SweetsTomato What?! What's the name of that novel?!!
DragonKnight531 Fellow author here: Your dialogues and paragraphs needs work especially the spacing. It hurts my eyes :P
Dontlookdown hmmmm.... tragic..... hmmmm..... xianxia and wuxia cliche plotlines hmm.....
use pc.
Cool and good.
MasterRabbink Hmmm....
Last time I checked the wattpad site, I saw some horror novels around.
Horror isn't really much of a theme here....
How about try wattpad? There's some readers who want horror novels stuff there. :wink:
