SnoozySloth thanks so much @SnoozySloth !
I've changed the () to ' ' for inner thoughts.

What grammar mistakes did you notice...? I'd love to fix them!

Fun fact:
My phone corrects "inner" to "dinner"

      SnoozySloth thanks snoozy!! I can read the same chapter 10 times and still can't see those mistakes!! Thanks for spotting and helping out...

      Very kind of a top 100-er to help a lowly plebeian like me..

        Here's my first try in the writing prompts contest!
        Entry for Writing Prompt Contest #26: Legendary Mage
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        Title: Reborn as a Sea Spirit

        Genre: Fantasy

        Synopsis: Sassy university student turned Sea Spirit VS Saintly Mysterious Royal Mage
        I am a normal university student. When I opened my eyes from my nap, I became a side character in the novel I read. I was under the sea.
        Ianthe: "Wait didn't this character die in the last chapter? I have to avoid my death no matter what! This silver haired gentleman who rescued me, do you need a maid?"
        Follow Ianthe's life to avoid her inevitable death while studying to be a top mage!

        This is my first try in a writing contest. If you're interested in the story, it'll mean a lot if you can take a lot! Thank you :D

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          Lucifer's Revenge

          Summary
          The story a mage who will die and become a statue in the Honorary Hall and then forgotten, even though all he did. Whereas the Prince will get cheering crown and festivals will be held to celebrate the crowning of the Prince. Then she, who left him will also forget him and marry Prince, all while thinking that she is doing this for the kingdom.

          Now-now the story like this will become a lot boring, at least for those who like the protagonist not the Prince, so let's send him back in time.

            SinisterSmile Thank you so much for giving it a try! I'm glad you like it!! It means a lot to me!
            Yes, I prefer shorter chapters, maybe because I like short breezy reads :D
            I actually have another story that totally fits Prompt contest 27, sadly it's already posted.

              Ierrech
              Well its good. Made me a bit jealous but even sparked some inspiration for the storyline of my novel. Not that I'll copy.

                  So many joining this week compared to the previous ones.. I suppose Mage is an easy theme.. 😅

                  Is it alright if this Patriarch joins a mortal writing contest like this??
                  (Sigh).. Maybe next time. I'll just focus on being laz... i mean cultivating!

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