Ierrech
My review of his novel if anyone is interested. Highly recommend it based on the first two chapters. After that, I'm unsure.
Note: I give full 5 stars despite whatever I write below. Please forgive any grammar mistakes in my review, as I am writing it on mobile. Reveiw written as of only 3 chapters being written, so keep that in mind. The author may edit things which would result in a higher score than described below. Writing Quality 4/5: Writing flows well and is of high-quality. Minus half a point for a few small grammar mistakes. Minus half a point for using parentheses for internal thoughts. No idea what's up with that. Most authors either just write internal thoughts openly or enclose them in single quotes. Never seen parentheses being used before exept for maybe systems. Writing will be 5/5 if these things are fixed. Updates 5/5: New novel with 3 chapters instantly published. Story 4/5: A very strong start that immediatly builds a super interesting world. An alternative history Earth, eastern cultivation world, and potentially other worlds. I hope MC has some ultimate goal soon. Minus 1 point for chapter 3 confusing me. Character Design: 5/5. MC isn't my cup of tea but I still liked him anyways suprisingly. Excellent emotions. Antagonist was good too. World background 5/5: As mentioned earlier. Awsome worlds from the start. Suggestions for author 1. Change parenthese internal thoughts to single quotes. 2. Chapter 3... I don't know, but maybe explain what's going on. Are we still following MC reincarnated or not. Did I miss something? I'm admittedly pretty tired right now so I may have... Final thoughts: First two chapters are damn amazing. You can tell the author put a good amount of effort and love into them. He took everything he did great in his other novel and improved on it drastically by making the story easy to read and follow. If author keeps up the same quality as the first two chapters, then I see this easily entering the top 100 and higher.
