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Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11724532206492105/Brutal-Journey-of-an-Unfortunate-Female-Heroine

Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.

Comment on how I could improve! Any advice is welcomed!,,ԾㅂԾ,,

    withlovetale sure why not? : )
    I have left one and thanks for your review. I seriously need some suggestions and you gave quite good pointers!

    If you know then please do tell- how many reviews or views are required to have an overall ratings for the novel? I am totally new to this ...scratches my head so I am illiterate regarding this matter!

    Sapphirechelsea237 Sure! I just finished yours. I tried to be in-depth and went on a point by point basis. Hope it’s helpful! (:

    As for reviewing mine, I don’t mind comments on chapters instead of a review. I’d rather know the reactions after each chapter’s events rather than an overall idea. Up to you~!

      withlovetale Sure thing, and the same goes for what I said to Sapphire. I’m not against reviews, but if given a choice of one or the other, rather than a review, I would rather know a reader’s reactions after chapter events, so comments after chapters would be more helpful.

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