I'm keen for pacing and character connection feedback, if there's still an opening.
To My Sunflower
Reviewing any original novels.
withlovetale Sure, do you want a review swap or just comments?
If just comments, you don’t have to read mine if you don’t want to, and I’ll post them on the thread I mentioned earlier.
For reviews, here’s my story.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12836075506617305
Yuyumamoru OK, thanks! :D
Reflex I will review yours, you do mine : )
here it is-
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/your betraying love
Though it has five chapters till now, but I would seriously like to get some suggestions!
Chryiss
Could you review mine? I can do yours, if you don't mind. Here -
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/YOUR-BETRAYING-LOVE
Thanks!
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Sapphirechelsea237 Sure! I just finished yours. I tried to be in-depth and went on a point by point basis. Hope it’s helpful! (:
As for reviewing mine, I don’t mind comments on chapters instead of a review. I’d rather know the reactions after each chapter’s events rather than an overall idea. Up to you~!
Chryiss
Sure, I would leave comments !!! Thanks for reviewing!!! : )
Sapphirechelsea237 I've posted my review but I uh, had a little accident...
You'll see it there.
Yuyumamoru Thanks a lot!!! _
I will trouble you again after I have edited the chapters ! Your suggestions are very helpful!!!
Sapphirechelsea237 No worries!
Chryiss i would like a review please. Thank you.
withlovetale Sure thing, and the same goes for what I said to Sapphire. I’m not against reviews, but if given a choice of one or the other, rather than a review, I would rather know a reader’s reactions after chapter events, so comments after chapters would be more helpful.
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Title: My brother's friend
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12373423206351105/
Genre: Romance fiction
Synopsis: Tang An is a high school student about to graduate. But everything changes when her brother's friend moves in. Battling with trauma from home, she tries to overcome her family challenges but when an unknown secret is exposed, can Tang An survive its consequences or will she die at fates hands?
Note: For anyone who leaves a review, comments, votes or rates my book, I'll reciprocate. And if you do, just leave a reply here so that I'll know. Have fun and I hope will be able to help ourselves.
I'm open for swaps again.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
Elude
Title: Endless Vertex
It’s about Warriors, cultivation and stuff
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13189662305003005
Hope you like it
i'm new at it so pls review mine guys.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12915121006003905/Living-in-Marvel-World-with-DOTA-System
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13133894505806605/Celestial-Dragon-King%2C-Harem-Emperor
not sure if you're still doing the reviews, but take a look.
Also, anyone who wants a review just dm me, and i'll leave you one.
Title: The Dragon Prince's Beloved Wife is a Translator
Summary:
Transmigrated into a trash body of general's daughter as female lead? Peh! Mainstream! Transmigrated to be villainess? Common! What about transmigrated and end up as a cannon fodder? Have read it before!
From that many options to transmigrate how could she, Li Shi Ying a very ordinary english department college student, suddenly woke up in a crippled body of the female lead's ex-maidservant?! Heavens this is too unfair!
In the world where the strong is respected, she with her crippled body can't cultivate? No problem! Dozen high rank spiritual beasts fight over to protect her!
Beast tamer is rare? Hmph! The beast languange is her hometown languange!
Can't be an alchemist/array master? Who cares? She could become a translator! Without translator all those rare jobs won't even exist!
Watch how she ruled over the world without having a single bit of cultivation energy in her body!
But can someone please tell her how could she suddenly become the dragon prince's wife? She wanna cry, mommaa!!!
Ps: This is a perfect story for those who is bored with the usual cultivation novel.
Warning: Smut scene chp 7-9!! If u don't like to read it just skip that chapters.
If u don't like to read imperfect grammar then this novel might not be your cup of tea
Title: The Damn Hunter
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12138731905986405/The-Damn-Hunter
Synopsis: Yang Guang is the last hunter protecting his city from The Damn, creatures from another universe aiming to harm humans to strengthen themselves but the damn are not the only problems that Yang Guang need to face as he ventures beyond the small city into the world and discover a secret that should not be reveal for another two thousand years.
Hope you enjoy my novel :D