Pretty sure the original poster isn’t around to read.... But I’m up for reading anyone’s story and offering comments. Just post here https://forum.webnovel.com/d/21554-recommend-your-story-through-a-game/19
Reviewing any original novels.
I'll just leave this here so please feel free to look at it!
Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11724532206492105/Brutal-Journey-of-an-Unfortunate-Female-Heroine
Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.
Comment on how I could improve! Any advice is welcomed!,,ԾㅂԾ,,
Sapphirechelsea237 i would like to read and review yours.
Please check mine out, if you don't mind
Chryiss I'm up to yours. if you don't mind.
Here is mine.
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withlovetale sure why not? : )
I have left one and thanks for your review. I seriously need some suggestions and you gave quite good pointers!
If you know then please do tell- how many reviews or views are required to have an overall ratings for the novel? I am totally new to this ...scratches my head so I am illiterate regarding this matter!
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Yuyumamoru I will leave a review, if you do not mind.
Please have a look at mine too, and kindly leave a review!!! :D
Here it is-
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/your betraying love
Feel free to advice!
Thanks!!!
mvphoenix
I could drop a review , if you don't mind!
Please check out mine too and leave a review! Here it is-
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/your betraying love
I have just started it, but I would like to get a few suggestions! It would really help me! :D
Thanks!
I wanna get in on this too!
Title: Destiny Forged
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13142328105838605/Destiny-Forged
Sapphirechelsea237 Will do when I have time!
I'm keen for pacing and character connection feedback, if there's still an opening.
To My Sunflower
withlovetale Sure, do you want a review swap or just comments?
If just comments, you don’t have to read mine if you don’t want to, and I’ll post them on the thread I mentioned earlier.
For reviews, here’s my story.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12836075506617305
Yuyumamoru OK, thanks! :D
Reflex I will review yours, you do mine : )
here it is-
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/your betraying love
Though it has five chapters till now, but I would seriously like to get some suggestions!
Chryiss
Could you review mine? I can do yours, if you don't mind. Here -
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/YOUR-BETRAYING-LOVE
Thanks!
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Sapphirechelsea237 Sure! I just finished yours. I tried to be in-depth and went on a point by point basis. Hope it’s helpful! (:
As for reviewing mine, I don’t mind comments on chapters instead of a review. I’d rather know the reactions after each chapter’s events rather than an overall idea. Up to you~!
Chryiss
Sure, I would leave comments !!! Thanks for reviewing!!! : )
Sapphirechelsea237 I've posted my review but I uh, had a little accident...
You'll see it there.
Yuyumamoru Thanks a lot!!! _
I will trouble you again after I have edited the chapters ! Your suggestions are very helpful!!!
Sapphirechelsea237 No worries!
Chryiss i would like a review please. Thank you.