Hi! Not sure if we have PM here, I'm new at the site. I read the first two chapters of your book. You write well, and the world building seems pretty solid. The only thing I can think of that might be turning off potential readers is how you described the childbirth? I'm really not sure, though, that's the only thing I can think of. We seem to be from the same country, but clarify with me later if I'm wrong:
Mukhang sinadya mo na mag-tunog talik yung panganganak? Medyo gets ko naman kung bakit, kaya lang may something na nakaka-off. Alam naman natin na kung gagawin "yun" ng tao, sa panganganak nga hahantong, pero madami sa atin ang ayaw ma-remind nun. Sana gets mo point ko.
I'll be adding you to my library, because I can see you're good. And wow you made it to 60+ chapters of radio silence without getting too discouraged, I applaud you. I've only been serializing for a few days and I'm stressed out already XD