ForerunnerOfSky First of all, the story is very descriptive, in a good way. I love the time taken to let the reader experience the moment through your descriptions. I am not lost in any way reading this. The MC is very relatable, in a way down to earth and human. What I mean is he has emotions and his actions kind of reflect these emotions without you putting any emphasis on them. It makes the reader, me, empathize with the MC, Gyun, on a deeper level and be more immersed in the story flow. I can tell the MC is somewhat broken inside, unpredictable too. I have to mention that your story development is more unique than most. It made me interested in following up on more updates and curious about any plot twists. This story has a charm and active energy to it that draws you into reading more and more until the latest updated chapter.
I haven't found any downsides to it, the grammar is up to point and the dialogs are realistic enough. Your writing style is specially adapted to you so I am no judge on that, you pick how you want the story told.
PS:// You got yourself a new follower to your book. Please update it 😁
I can review it like this in the book if you would like~~