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Moiraine
Hiya, Moraine! I would love for help editing my prologue chapter of "The Search for Knowledge". I'm aware that I break the "show don't tell" rule in it and wish to fix that, but i don't have much time to go fix all the mistakes, let alone find them. You would be a god send if I'm being honest.

Plus I might get a cool new reader <3

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12523039905742005

Moiraine Hi there, English is my second language but in my place we kind of mix both American and British English.
I used grammarly and word checker for my recent chapters by my initial chapters lack fine tuning. Even though some readers pointed out a few mistakes, I'm unable to find any better alternatives for them. I would be grateful if you could edit my first chapter.
Title: I Hate Systems
Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12200080106081005
Discord: https://discord.gg/4x648kw

Hi Moiraine , its me again Himawarishima. I would like to take your kind offer for editing. I have successfully submit my auxiliary volume chapter 1.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12542472705831305
(Miss Nuggets and Lemonade)

Thank you again for your offer.

Hi there, I woud appreciate if you help me edit my novel

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11732671706495605/The-Love-That-Remains

It's a romantic fiction/supernatural novel. If you like, please take your time. I also use online grammar check sites, but they are not much helping.

qostoq I read your first chapter and edited it. There weren't a lot of mistakes, except for what you mentioned. Let me know how I can share it with you.

CreamAndCookies I really liked your first chapter! The only thing I had to fix were some time shift errors. You go back and forth between past tense and present tense sometimes. Let me know how I can send it to you.

I also wrote a fantasy story, but with a female lead. I don't know if there's too much magic in yours, but if you like fantasy, maybe you'll enjoy it.

Let me know if you can take a look and give me your opinion.

Moiraine
Thank you! Please send it to the mail adress below.

serkan.sims3k@hotmail.com

Moiraine hey Moiraine, I’m not really in need of an editor (since I know most of my mistakes, but am too lazy to correct them) but I would still want to check your novel out. If you feel like it, would you like to do a review swap?

Moiraine omg, really? do you mind if i send it to you straight on discord?

Hey @Moiraine

You came at right time. i really do need an editor for my first novel. i'm using grammarly but i still feel that something is missing with my chapters and i think you can help me with it.

i already published 2 chapters.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12195309606071705/Evil-God-System

Thanks for Kind help.

Moiraine

Hi. I wrote a book called The GrimJack. Could you please read it and share your comments? I will really appreciate it.

Moiraine

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12104340705930405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4302430946

This is the link for The GrimJack.

Moiraine
Can you try editing my work. I really want to try writing a book but there are still grammar mistakes in it. Could you try editing Chapter 1 first? I hope you'll like it and continue editing my work.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/17677672706405105