Moiraine Hi there, English is my second language but in my place we kind of mix both American and British English.
I used grammarly and word checker for my recent chapters by my initial chapters lack fine tuning. Even though some readers pointed out a few mistakes, I'm unable to find any better alternatives for them. I would be grateful if you could edit my first chapter.
Title: I Hate Systems
Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12200080106081005
Discord: https://discord.gg/4x648kw

    qostoq I read your first chapter and edited it. There weren't a lot of mistakes, except for what you mentioned. Let me know how I can share it with you.

      CreamAndCookies I really liked your first chapter! The only thing I had to fix were some time shift errors. You go back and forth between past tense and present tense sometimes. Let me know how I can send it to you.

      I also wrote a fantasy story, but with a female lead. I don't know if there's too much magic in yours, but if you like fantasy, maybe you'll enjoy it.

      Let me know if you can take a look and give me your opinion.

          Moiraine hey Moiraine, I’m not really in need of an editor (since I know most of my mistakes, but am too lazy to correct them) but I would still want to check your novel out. If you feel like it, would you like to do a review swap?

              Moiraine omg, really? do you mind if i send it to you straight on discord?

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                  Moiraine

                  Hi. I wrote a book called The GrimJack. Could you please read it and share your comments? I will really appreciate it.

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