Lord_of_sleep I like the MC a lot. Plot is one of my favourites. Aside from the short chapters in beginning and some common grammatical mistakes, it was pretty easy to read. Waiting for more updates.

      NatsumeRikka Ok i'll have a read of yours tomorrow morning. I saw it was only 12 chapters. A bit sleepy right now so I wouldn't be able to give the best review I can.Will at least read the first chapter before sleeping though. Thanks by the way glad you liked it.☺

        NatsumeRikka I like it but have a few suggestion. Ok after reading your first chapter there is alot of information given to the reader. I think you could have stretch that one chapter into more. Also the sentences don't flow into one another.

        For instance for awhile it felt like I was just being given facts and not reading a story taking place. As a reader I like info but I would rather the first chapter be about the Mc. Like the chapter could have only been about the grave scene at that was the main topic for it.

        I think you have some awesome ideas I must say though ☺

            5 days later

            fixed version has released in google play ，plz update

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