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NatsumeRikka I like it but have a few suggestion. Ok after reading your first chapter there is alot of information given to the reader. I think you could have stretch that one chapter into more. Also the sentences don't flow into one another.

For instance for awhile it felt like I was just being given facts and not reading a story taking place. As a reader I like info but I would rather the first chapter be about the Mc. Like the chapter could have only been about the grave scene at that was the main topic for it.

I think you have some awesome ideas I must say though

Lord_of_sleep oh.. Okay thnx, I'll keep that in mind and make changes accordingly.

it was fixed in version 3.3.5, now only 50% user can update

Lord_of_sleep what!! That's exactly what I said

ReachZhaiTW of course I'm in the 50% that it doesn't work for ooof

DragonKnight531 You stealing my thoughts man lol

NatsumeRikka Ok I'll have a read of the rest

Lord_of_sleep wha- me hahhahaha maybe, lol I wrote it on her first chapter though that's the only difference, if we both saw that it means its not just 1 reader but a glaring problem

DragonKnight531 Yh that's true but it's good when you have others that can identify the problem. Sometimes the writer won't see certain things

Lord_of_sleep yup

Lord_of_sleep sure, :-)

DragonKnight531 already 100%　released

fixed version has released in google play ，plz update

ReachZhaiTW yeah works for me now