anne_2 Review done. I strongly suggest you download and install Grammarly in your phone. It will help you a lot to check your work before posting. Also you need a new synopsis. I left a few some more advices in the comments. Your story is good but remember: presentation is everything! Keep up the good work!
@MishaK you are next
On queue:
@shrishthi
@fantasy_land
@NguyenDynasty
@great_gamer I missed your tag the first time. you still want to trade reviews?
ihateyounot did someone review your novel? if not, tag me and I wil read it.