Hello im a new author. Do review mine please. Title ; The forgotten slumber : waking the fallen. Please guide me. I open criticism i really mean it

Sealed away in eternal slumber, darkness and light danced around. Being the existing yet nonexistent soul.
All she later came to know was that she was only a few months old when they found her, sealed in an ice coffin inside a tomb. In her growth, she showed abnormalities that a child shouldn't possess. She was so knowledgeable yet she was also clueless.
'Who is she?'
Her memories were blank.
When she was trying to adapt to her now peaceful life, everything seemed to go wrong. Even the Heavens went against her as if to satisfy a personal grudge. Unknown pictures, scene after scene, like the frame scrolls of movies constantly buzzed in her mind, forcefully etched in the very depths of her soul, making her painfully memorize those seemingly unknown events of her memories.
Those were her’s. It seemed like, even in this life she couldn't get a peace of mind.
She was robbed of her peaceful life. She was forced to train herself harder. Stronger! More!
It seemed that, in her quest for her mental peace against the very heavens, she was still too weak.

4 days later

Hi guys, I hope you enjoy the story.

This is my first web novel: Transcending the Martial Peak.

It's an Eastern fantasy with a modern guy.

Synopsis:

A college student who loves novels ended up in a cultivation world.

With his 'Novel Knowledge' and 'Plot Armour', How would the poor world he ended up in survive from him?

What would he do facing the situations many Main characters faced knowing the usual result beforehand?

Join him as he relives his life and rewrites the very definition of 'Protagonist'.

From now on, The word 'MC' shall gain new meaning.

Give it a try and U might love it!

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Chapters:107(ongoing)

Thoughts: Well, a synopsis is not always a proper reflection of the story. I would like to say that this novel has an MC who is very relatable. There are plenty of funny moments. As the plot moves ahead, you can expect more action. The story has its fair share of action, romance, comedy, and challenges.

Thanks in advance!

I would like to recommend the newest addition to my writing family, My Life or Your Memory.

Title: My Life or Your Memory

Genre: Romance

Release rate: 1 chapter a day, 10 chapters currently released

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13699985505867105/My-Life-or-Your-Memory

Summary:
She was born in the countryside where she lived her childhood together with her weak and sick brother. While she was healthy and capable of playing outside every day, he was confined to his bed, unable to make a move, listening to her tales of the world beyond the windows.

One day her brother could no longer hold on to his frail life and he succumbed to a sudden virus. Unable to cope with the loss, Jiang Yingyue took over the life of her deceased brother.

Starting life anew in the capital, Jiang Yingyue became Jiang Fengmian. A lonely prince charming who never got close to anyone yet somehow her life got entangled with the fate of Han Qingshan, the young master of the Han Corporation.

He was born with a silver spoon in his mouth, grew up as the heir to the biggest corporation in the country and one of the biggest on an international scale.

He was a sunshine boy, happy and always smiling. It was like a spring breeze flitting across the road as he came by, stealing the hearts of all women. His kindness knew no bounds, but only for her would he really care, only for her would he become a wife-protecting devil.

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Here's mine. Feel free to leave comments or critiques if you have taken interest to mine.

Normal in Parenthesis (Status: Completed)
Synopsis:
"The world is unfair and unjust."

Gin Sakato, a high school student finds himself in a seemingly normal life. But everything changed just right after he was starting to discover his once lost emotions. With a life changing event, he faces the darkness of the reality and learn what is the reason of his being.

Rainbow of the Horizon (Status: Ongoing)
Synopsis:
"The world is unfair and unjust…
that's the second time I've said that, haven't I?"

Gin's somewhat eventful life continued together with his ever so increasing number of companions in the unpredictable world they live in and discover its urban mysteries. New people and new happenings came to their life as they move forward in the hardships and mishaps that are bound to test their individual strengths. But the sun's hope comes shining down after the rain of despair and sometimes, rainbows of bliss spreads in the horizon.

Here is mine. "My way to you."

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12021185405774505

About a girl name Ariana who was sold to a brother at the age of 12 by her jealous mother. Do to a blow to the head she unlocks her power and memories of a past life and decides to change the sex industry by making it into a maid cafe. It is her adventure of finding out who she is, where she came from and why she died in her past life while trying to stay out of the hands of the church who are abducting people who have jewel like eyes, trying to controls her blood that comes to life, fighting to keep her love, and trying to walk the right path or else be destroyed by the Lumas, the very creatures she gave life to.

Also Hinder-Rella this one is completed.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11241536305310005

Twist in Cinderella, there is a lot of growth with all the characters. FL is not a let's wait and see type of character but rather someone who is willing to fight for her right while the ML is loving, protective and supportive.

    A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO

    Chapters:8 including the prologue.

    Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/13262524805242405/A-Returnee-Wants-to-Play-VRMMO

    Summary:

    At long last, MC defeated the final enemy that was threatening the world he was summoned to countless years ago and fulfill his wish to return to his homeworld... only to realize that it has changed as well. But, none of this matter to him since his wish all along was to play games and laze around. Especially now, that there is finally an opportunity to fulfill his wish of playing VRMMORPG, nothing will stand in his way to play it how that he likes.

    "So, I can get one of the greatest Class there is huh... don't want it! it only has one profession slot!."

    "Hey! World Boss! Can't you see I'm in the middle of gathering ingredients? go scram somewhere else before I get angry"

    "What? You want me to join your Guild and help you rule the game?. Hell no! That too much work, I prefer to go on adventures!"

    Join Nex who don't want to fight and be the protagonist anymore, on his grand ambition of life full of games and leisure!

    Title: Ergon V

    Genre: Action, Sci-Fi, Military, Martial Arts, Cyberpunk, Psychological

    Chapters: 11 already published (34k words), 2-3 chapters a week

    Logline: "In a not so distant future, five teenagers are selected for an advanced antiterrorist unit, having to balance their personal lives with their new responsibilities to avoid world chaos."

    Summary: 2035. A world on the verge of a new world war due to lack of resources has found a way to generate clean, self-sustaining energy. Nuclear plants all over it have been reused on the basis of this miraculous discovery conducted by the global conglomerate Cytek.

    This company has recently expanded its horizons and developed mass consumption products such as cybernetic limb prostheses, their latest success. However, media from all over the world claim it has secretly developed vehicles, weapons, and many other military-grade prototypes.

    From terrorist groups to entire nations, everyone seeks to seize these new technologies. In an effort to curb the recent worldwide raid of violence and terror, the United Nations has endorsed the questioned “Sentinels” initiative, a global military force funded by the world’s most powerful nations.

    Nobody doubts this project has been carried out only by the enormous pressure exerted by international financial capital. What no one suspects, what no one even imagines, is the dark origin behind these new technologies, capable of completely changing the course of humanity...

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13498268505015005/Ergon-V

    Mind if I join in as well? Shameless posting!

    Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11724532206492105/Brutal-Journey-of-an-Unfortunate-Female-Heroine

    Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.

    Any constructive advice is always welcome!

    16 days later

    Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13851990206750205/Xi-Lian-%3A-Queen's-Path-of-Life

    Title: Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life

    Release Rate: Once per Day

    Synopsis:
    "My little Xi family's precious jewel, what do you want most in this world?"

    “I want to go to school!”

    “What?!?” The old man staggered back with eyes wide.

    “That’s right! I want to go to high school!”

    “Nonsense! Why would you want to go to high school?”

    She can speak twelve languages, bungee jump off Mount Tai, face-slap those so-called masters, steal a katana off a ninja, and perfectly use those knives and guns.

    Xi Lian comes from the elite of the elite. She's beautiful, a genius, and comes from money! The epitome of perfection!

    But what happens when she wants to go to school? Her grandpa chooses an elite school for her, filled with eccentrics and geniuses. She couldn't go to a normal school like she wanted to. Which makes it even more fun! Because after that is when all her fellow geniuses hail her as queen!

    .....But grandpa has some conditions..

    “Number one, you aren’t allowed to get too close with boys, you understand? This is the most important!”

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      For Filipino readers, I hope you can check this out. :)

      Title: Her Name is Katie
      Genre: Romance Fiction
      *This is a Tagalog Novel
      Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13877660805908305

      Synopsis:
      Katie doesn't have a permanent address because the world is her home. She travels for work and she doesn't want to settle in just one place.

      She also has no intention of falling in love because it will only prevent her to do the things that she wants. Besides, she doesn't want to be left alone in the end, like what her parents did.

      But it seems like that notion was about to change when she literally bumped into Colin. Everything happened so fast that she became his girlfriend.

      It was the first time in a long time that she went home but why did the universe allow her to be with someone so annoying and so full of himself?

      If she doesn't need something from Colin, she could've turned him down when he asked her to be his girlfriend, but she does. She needs him big time.

      Katie is confident that she can pretend to be his girlfriend so well. What she can't do is to stop herself from falling when she started to know him a little bit more.

      It turned out that Colin wasn't so bad at all and the more she's with him, the more she realizes how beautiful he is as a person. How can someone be so completely different from what he lets other people see?

      Katie finally fell for him because of how he cared for her truly- the thing she looks for a guy the most.

      But when she realized how much she loved Colin, Katie finally received the news she had long been waiting for. How can she manage to leave the country and the guy she grew to love genuinely?

        Title: Naruto Uzumaki: Chains of Fate

        Sypnosis:
        Naruto Uzumaki. Among all of his chains of fate that would connect him to the same world, The chain that connected his fate would by complete miracle, change. As a result the world within was completely changed by this event. For better or worse. His own changes will lead him to a destiny that differs from all of his potential timelines...

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/13854177105699905/Naruto-Uzumaki%3A-Chains-of-Fate

        Genre: Fan-Fiction
        Chapters: 9
        Status: Just Started, so yes. Ongoing. :)

        Reviews would be nice.

        Also very happy at the way the fic is progressing so far uwu

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          Title: Terani Mara
          By: TheMarCaSa

          Synopsis:
          He watched as the princess wept for her fallen father.

          He didn't expect to find her in Saquiro.

          Soon, he promised.

          With both father and brother murdered and a mother who became a stranger, will Mara be able to rule her people and take a throne she never wanted?

          But, that's not all there is to it.

          Danger looms in the darkness ready to kill the last living royals of Saquiro.

          Secrets unravel themselves one by one.

          And Mara finds herself far from home in the hands of the beasts.

          Or rather.. one particular beast. Was she really far from home or does she not have a home to begin with?

          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13719775306020605

            Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
            Title: Discovering evil
            Genre: fantasy
            Synopsis:
            "Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared.

            "You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in.

            "Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger."

            Magic is real.

            There's a whole world of it.

            Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...

            On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.

              Title: Reincarnated as a Footballer

              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10839623005185305/Reincarnated-as-a-Footballer

              Genre: Sports with System

              Synopsis: Well the title itself is pretty much self-explanatory. A football maniac is kissed hard by the very popular Truck-kun and he is given a second chance by God to become whatever he wants AND is also given a system. This is not your typical system and is my take on the system genre.
              Hope you enjoy it :D

              Cheers!

                Hello! I've started a new novel and would appreciate feedback for it or just anyone willing to read it! It's going to be a fairly dark story, though not one that would qualify it for 18+.

                I hope you will give it a chance! https://www.webnovel.com/book/13871961706918305

                EUNOIA--

                Beautiful.
                The essence of the word eludes many.
                The sadness of the word illudes more.

                Life in this world was made to be "beautiful," but the reality is fleeting as if it were an untouchable illusion.

                But, there are a few, who were born into this world, who are able to find the beauty that was lying dormant under the deceptive, dark, and decrepit minds that live there.

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