mountwolf89 Boy toy..side character.. Lol! Sounds funny, I'll take a look later~!
The sci-fi meets fantasy sounds like mine except in reverse; although, my story actually hasn't gotten to that part yet.

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      Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
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      Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.

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        @Chryiss Do you mind checking mine out too? I would appreciate any review, comment, and constructive criticisms.
        Title: Destiny Forged

        Genre: VRMMORPG, Martial Arts, Fantasy, Romantic Subplot, Overpowered MC.

        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13142328105838605/Destiny-Forged

        Sypnosis:
        Despite possessing unrivaled combat prowess and unparalleled instincts, he had always lived a restricted life, hidden away from the rest of the world.

        However, with the appearance of the VRMMORPG, Destiny Forged, he can finally show his existence to the world and rise above the elites and experts.

        Follow our protagonist as he grabs ahold of his own destiny and battle against fate.

          Title: Wholly Undead

          Brief Summary: Join Jack, after his death by microwaved food, as he reincarnates into the body of a ruler of an undead kingdom in a strange environment of the underworld. Follow our, wannabe nihilist and socially awkward hero as he learns about his world, and tries to play the part of their supreme pontiff and ruler of the Holy Kingdom of Deagoth.

          Novel features heavy kingdom building elements, Character relationships, Mild Romance, Drama, Magic, War

          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11210172405299305/Wholly-Undead

          Enjoy

            mountwolf89 I haven't been participating in review swaps; I just want to personally read your story because it sounded interesting. :) But if you want to check it out, it's called My World To Live, a fantasy mish mash of other genres basically. There aren't many chapters though, so nothing "big" has happened yet.

                @mountwolf89 Since your story is over 50 chapters, I'll be reading a little at a time. I may or may not comment here and there. I'm a casual reader.

                The content is understandable, but unfortunately, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. For just the beginning sentences of the first chapter, I marked the necessary corrections in parentheses. I'm not really sure what's the best way to fix this except find an editor maybe?

                Splash! Water splatter(ed) in every direction. Lila sat on the stool(,) working a latter (lather) into one of many dress shirts to be completed by the end of the day.
                "Why!?" Lila threw the soapy shirt in (from) her hands into the bucket with the rest of it's kind. Just (its kind, just) to be then torture(d) by her stomping feet.
                "Why? do (Why do) I have to be on laundry duty again(?)!" Lila yelled at no one to particular. But (in particular, but) received an answer none the less (nonetheless).
                "Because you can't keep your mouth closed long enough for your brain to remind you (to) keep it shut." Kara replied while placing another load of laundry next to Lila's just empty basket.
                Lila's faced (face) turned black just looking at the extra load. Then(,) (her face) turned even more blacker facing her frenemy's laughing face.

                EDIT: --Spongebob narrator voice-- A few hours later...
                I ended up reading up to chapter 36 because I actually found the story very interesting. It's definitely up my alley. I actually thought I wouldn't be able to stand reading it with all the grammatical errors, but I was able to tune it out because the story was good (and understandable) enough. So I guess, mission accomplished? I'm likely your reader now, haha!

                  I have a Writing Comp entry, #59, going on right now, I wouldn't mind some attention. I'm trying my best for it to be a romantic BL comedy, but it's hard when I'm more of a fantasy action writer. Yes, it's boys' love/LGBT+/gay stuff/guys loving guys and all that jazz... I hate asking, but since this prompt-comp relies on popularity, please vote if you read and like. Cheers.

                  Bradley James is fired and hired on the same day. Rotten luck, especially when his stable paying job as an analyst changes to something unexpected.

                  The one who hires him is none other than Adrian Masters; the extremely handsome and widely talked about young entrepreneur and CEO of a thriving global telecommunications' organisation known as T-Strike.

                  Adrian takes Bradley under his wing as his face for his new product.

                  What happens when business affairs are muddled with those of the heart?
                  A story of two businessmen played by fate.

                  Mind if I join in? This is my first story here on webnovel, will be updating in a few hours!

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/13150526106932405/VR

                  Summary: The year is 2113. The real and virtual worlds have never been more intertwined - only, that seems to be the problem. Increasingly so.

                  When twisted individuals seek to take this technological advancement to new and possibly immoral grounds, it's up to a young group of gamers to save both their virtual sanctuary, and the fate of mankind.

                  Genres: Scifi, Fantasy, Mystery, RPG.
                  Subgenres: Action/Adventure, LGBTQ, Thriller.

                  Wow, Can I shamelessly join in? :grin:

                  Title: Under The Veil of Night

                  Synopsis:
                  Kanae Nali lives in a city known as the “City of Crime." The city only follows one law: only the strongest can live. Citizens are divided according to their clans, groups, gangs, and normal civilians.
                  Fighting is normal, death is inevitable, and extortion is common.
                  From outside, Kanae appears to be a regular High School Student who tries to live a normal school life. However, unbeknownst to many, her ordinary life is not as simple as it seems.

                  tags so far: school life, secret identity, slow pace story

                  Thank you :smiley:

                  Chryiss Thank you for your suggestions. I will definitely go back and edit my pass chapters. Please continue to leave any construction criticism you might have. I want to grow as an author.

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