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Chryiss I have this bad feeling I might be better at reviewing than at writing :D

Having an MA rather than an MFA just reinforces it; especially since my degree lies in comparative literature...

Anyway, multicharacter stories are like juggernauts. They take forever to get started. I fully expect to be at the late beginning when I hit chapter thirty, and that's simply too early for a review. It's very different from an FP or even TP omni where you fire up the character afterburner from day go.

In the long run I benefit from doing what I do as well. I build a decent rep as a reviewer and receive a fair amount of reviews for my own story. It's well worth it ;)

StenDuring I’d say you’re the best reviewer that I’ve seen on Webnovel. >< I even picked up doing your stars breakdown for reviews now!

I can’t handle many characters introduced at once; my goldfish brain just explodes trying to mentally keep track. T-T It’s certainly a difficult kind of story to accomplish (and to be honest I think your story does the best at it that I’ve seen so far).

Chryiss Hi! I was wondering if you'd be interested in a review swap with you? I'm currently reading your novel and really like your pacing and how you've set up your characters. I always feel like my flow and my characters are my weak points unfortunately. I seem to have trouble really expressing them. I was wondering if you could review my novel and give advice on how to begin remedying that problem?

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13095339005671505

And yes StenDuring is an amazing reviewer! Really helped me reflect about things I needed to do to improve my writing in general! I've also taken the stars breakdown review method hehe. All the love and power stones to you!

If you want a review swap, just leave a review and I'll review back! :)

Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13851990206750205/Xi-Lian-%3A-Queen's-Path-of-Life

Title: Xi Lian : Queen's Path of Life

Release Rate: Once per Day

Synopsis:
"My little Xi family's precious jewel, what do you want most in this world?"

“I want to go to school!”

“What?!?” The old man staggered back with eyes wide.

“That’s right! I want to go to high school!”

“Nonsense! Why would you want to go to high school?”

She can speak twelve languages, bungee jump off Mount Tai, face-slap those so-called masters, steal a katana off a ninja, and perfectly use those knives and guns.

Xi Lian comes from the elite of the elite. She's beautiful, a genius, and comes from money! The epitome of perfection!

But what happens when she wants to go to school? Her grandpa chooses an elite school for her, filled with eccentrics and geniuses. She couldn't go to a normal school like she wanted to. Which makes it even more fun! Because after that is when all her fellow geniuses hail her as queen!

.....But grandpa has some conditions..

“Number one, you aren’t allowed to get too close with boys, you understand? This is the most important!”

Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
Title: Discovering evil
Genre: fantasy
Synopsis:
"Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared.

"You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in.

"Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger."

Magic is real.

There's a whole world of it.

Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...

On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.

I'm a new writer so I hope that you can check out my novel and comment or rate it.

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13896116005069505/
Title: The Zombie Queen's Second Chance

Synopsis:
"It’s the beginning of the Apocalypse, and zombies are running rampant over the Earth. Being transmigrated into a body of an abandoned girl, disowned by her own family, Chu Lixue finds herself in a tight situation.

If that wasn't enough, why does it feel like there's something wrong with her body?

Follow her journey, as she tries to carve out her own space in this Apocalyptic world, taking back what used to belong to her and getting revenge on all, that had previously harmed her. "

If somebody would like to do a review swap, just review my novel and I'll take a look at yours after.
Antinous Going to do a review of your novel now.

niharikabhol

No need to review any of my work atm. I'll make sure to check your new story out~ (:

SunScar9
How about we swap reviews?
The story am currently writing is titled Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack of Various Characters
Synopsis : Su Li dies of a chronic illness and her soul is bound to a system. Now this could be considered a blessing in disguise. Though skeptical and wary, she still decides to put her best foot forward.

She completes her assigned tasks earnestly keeping in mind not to let anyone catch on to the fact that the genuine goods have been overtaken by her. However, she soon realises that someone keeps following her from one world to another.

Slowly but surely she tries to figure out the reason for all of this world hopping business. Will she be able to get rid of the shackles placed on her by the system? Will she repudiate her deal with the system? Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer?

Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer? Only time will tell but untill then she needs to pull up her socks and get down to the business of counter attacking in lieu of various characters - cannon fodder, second female lead, main character, anti heroine, villainess etc.
Link : https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

Daoist_Food
How about we swap reviews?
The story am currently writing is titled Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack of Various Characters
Synopsis : Su Li dies of a chronic illness and her soul is bound to a system. Now this could be considered a blessing in disguise. Though skeptical and wary, she still decides to put her best foot forward.

She completes her assigned tasks earnestly keeping in mind not to let anyone catch on to the fact that the genuine goods have been overtaken by her. However, she soon realises that someone keeps following her from one world to another.

Slowly but surely she tries to figure out the reason for all of this world hopping business. Will she be able to get rid of the shackles placed on her by the system? Will she repudiate her deal with the system? Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer?

Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer? Only time will tell but untill then she needs to pull up her socks and get down to the business of counter attacking in lieu of various characters - cannon fodder, second female lead, main character, anti heroine, villainess etc.
Link : https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13975655405749205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

Title: The Life Of A Time Mage

Sypnopsis: You've heard of us Time Mages. About us manipulating time. It is true, but only to a minor extent. Like Element Mages who control their specific Elements, Time Mages control Time. Those fables about Time travelling is neither wrong nor accurate. We can Time travel, but we can't change the space. That's why it is called Time Frame Hopping.

Mavislin11 I'll swap reviews with you, if you interested?

HighJack mind doing a review swap

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303054919

Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

ShinSungmi aight, i'm gonna take my time reading yours first tomorrow i guess ( since i got some stories i need to read ), you can review mine first

HighJack alright, right on it

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

Title: The Arks

Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

The Dream Shifter

Yuki was a normal boy starting his first year in high school. The worst he had to deal with was sleeping in class, an overactive imagination and bullies throughout the school. However, his school life is suddenly turned upside when he is attacked by a man with the power to bring anything into reality. When his family is attacked he awakens his own powers discovering that he is not alone.

Now Yuki must pretend to lead a normal school life while keeping his imagination from controlling his powers and stay alive as assassins that are trying to prevent him from what is his rightfully.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/15916100706421405/The-Dream-Shifter

I've been updating this story alot with even 4 chapters per day and mass releases. Please leave a review and tell me so I can review your work too