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Chryiss Thanks a lot for informing me!!!😊
I am very much relieved!
And I have used Grammarly and some changes are done in my story. If you have time, then please give me a few suggestions!☺

      yunisao
      Hi can you review mine ???
      Title - HE FOUGHT FOR HER
      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12761641405113805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4301973072
      Synopsis

      -A HIGH SCHOOL LOVE STORY

      Kingston royal school
      A place where every teenager wants to go .

      Except LIA XI
      "lia congrats! you are selected for a full scholarship at Kingston's !!!"
      Her life turned 360• when she got a lifetime offer to study at a place where getting an entry was like climbing Mt Everest .

      Every rich heiresses and scholarship girl had an only goal to attend the royal school that was

      MIKE LONG

      Meet the ruthless arrogant and a Playboy who had no feelings and a dark past . Also known as most handsome teenager.

      UNTIL THAT TIME

      "Bro why you always bully lia ?? she had not done anything towards you then why hard feelings??"
      "Because she is mine to bully no one else"

      what happen when......

      The ruthless boy fight for a ruthless girl ???

          I'm done for reviews for now. My writing schedule is calling me :pensive:

            ThetaCreed
            I am doing yours now, I have already read it. It's awesome! with many great ideas!.
            Thanks a lot for your review! :)
            Actually now you have pointed it out, I suddenly remember that there was a mermaid Barbie movie, I saw 6-7 years back! Maybe the name Merlia, was imprinted in my subconscious mind from there only! :D

                I would like to review swap! Anyone interested reply to me or go over to my discord. :D

                Name: Autopsy of a Mind
                Author: SunScar9
                https://www.webnovel.com/book/13204132106106005/Autopsy-of-a-Mind

                Summary: Evie Lewis wanted to be a detective just like her father. Her life came crashing down when she found herself unable to save her parents, kidnapped by a serial killer and tortured for their pleasure. She escaped but she was just a shell of herself. She wished to live a silent life.

                An unexpected job offer and lots of pleading from a genius criminal psychologist lead her to be pulled back into the world of monsters. Follow Evie as she learns to dissect the human mind and forgive herself. And maybe fall in love, too.

                After all, who can resist Sebastian Butler?

                Pain is world-annihilating.

                I have felt it push me to the brink of death and catapult me back to the base of my very existence. It evoked in me a monster...

                It injected in me the violent need to survive—even if it meant that I had to eat the flesh of another.

                Pain instilled in me Reason. There is only one: You only have hope when you survive.

                  Aiming for 50 reviews, so I would appreciate it if you took a look at mine.

                  Name: Dream Star
                  Author: XOMatsumaeohana
                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/12788641006332505/Dream-Star
                  Synposis: "Why Terashima Lila? there are prettier girls and yet... " For Austin Kiryu, Terashima Lila held a charm of her own. Long silky black hair that fell past her milky skin. Gorgeous eyes exactly like a jewel, mixed with shades of phosphorescent colors. A smile as bright as the sun.

                  For Karashima Haruka, Terashima Lila is his savior. The one who saved him from a world of darkness. He is clumsy with words and cannot describe himself well, but he didn't need someone pretty or intelligent. He only wanted someone who understood him.

                  For her, the two of them were both equally important. Which hand will she take?

                  Set in Japan, 2035. After successfully attaining the status of top idol and surpassing her sister. Terashima Lila sets off on a journey to find what she is missing. On the day she stood on that legendary stage, she found something was incomplete. Now that she has fulfilled one dream. Another will begin.

                  Last year, he told her, "Stay by my side." That person words never left her mind as her journey leads her to the city where he is. Will he be able to help her find what she's missing? Karashima Haruka, a man, surrounded by an air of mystery different from her beloved. Someone with a dangerous past. Will he continue to draw her to him?

                  (Too long to post here, please click the link to read the full description)

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