Veronica8

Done reviewing, extremely lucid work. Incredible.

Edit:
Not to berate your work. But BL is not my type of thing, so I have only read a few chapters then reviewed.

      Sigheti I will review yours tomorrow, I added it already to my library...to make sure I wont forget it.

        XOMatsumaeohana I will review yours later, I will inform you here after am done.

        As of now am no longer doing review swap, am getting busier, XOMatsumaeohana novel will be the last am going to review. Thanks for the swap review guys, awesome to discover good stories comng from talented Authors like you! Thank you all! Good luck!

            Asphant Not at all. I'm cool with that. Thank for giving it a go.

            I like your story, so as I've mentioned before I'll come back with some more feedback I hope will offer ideas. Probably won't be to weekend. Cheers.

                Asphant Done reviewing!

                Your novel/s (not sure, you have more than one novel in your novel :P) or stories, is very unique. I actually like it very much. You just need to work on your character development (which I also need to work on), grammar and extra details. Just keep on reading and in due time you would notice your improvements. That's all, and keep on writing.

                EDIT:
                It is also important to know the difference between in, at, and on, there are some instances where I suddenly furrow my brows because of that little mistake. I think I read something about "laying 'in' his bed." which is supposed to be 'on'.

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